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Title: Not Such A Spoiled Brat 11 Nov 2022 9:00 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    I loved this chapter! Snape gets angry in a great way.
Title: Not Such A Spoiled Brat 13 May 2011 1:10 am
Reviewer: Shade_huntress (Signed) [Report This]
    Good story.
    ~Shade

    Author's Response: Thanks1 Glad you're enjoying it!
Title: Not Such A Spoiled Brat 02 Sep 2009 8:44 pm
Reviewer: N_Forest (Signed) [Report This]
    I loved your description of Snape as a Dark Angel. I really am enjoying Aunt Petunia too. It's great that she has got a personality and secrets of her own.

    Author's Response: That's how I see him, as a dark protector, very fierce and loving.  I wanted to try a different tack on Petunia here, as a decent yet abused wife. 
Title: Not Such A Spoiled Brat 26 Jan 2009 7:43 am
Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed) [Report This]
    Jeeezus Snape is SCARY when he's angry!! (That's a good thing lol)

    Author's Response: Yes, he certainly is! But harry needs someone to protect him, and a scary Snape is also a protective one . . .like German shepherd on steroids, LOL!
Title: Not Such A Spoiled Brat 18 Aug 2008 6:55 am
Reviewer: Mel (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Yes, go Sev! Beat him up! *chants*

    Can't wait to see the revenge. it should be awesome.

    Author's Response: Funny, I was saying the same thing as I wrote this! LOL!
Title: Not Such A Spoiled Brat 17 Aug 2008 1:37 am
Reviewer: blackmagicwoman (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Poor Harry! I love how you made Petunia into an abused woman, it gives her a reaosn for her actions and I can't wait to see where you go next! Hope Snape gives it to Vernon like nobody's business!

    Author's Response: I liked turning Petunia into a different type of character and I think most of you enjoyed seeing me do that.  As for Vernon, Snape's revenge is coming!
Title: Not Such A Spoiled Brat 21 Jul 2008 6:02 am
Reviewer: trust severus spy (Signed) [Report This]
    I LOVE IT! I LOVE IT! The Dursleys get their proper comeuppance, just as they've always deserved--and at the hands of Snape!!!
    And your description of him, likening him to the Angel of Death is right on, too!

    Author's Response: Thanks, I've always pictured Snape as a dark figure, the avenging angel, who comes with fire to cast down the wicked, and it's poetic justice really, since the Dursleys got away with child abuse in the books, in my opinion and they were never made to pay for what they did.  I'm a former preschool teacher and child abusers rank right up there with mass murderers and rapists in my book and calling the Dursleys to account here was just my way of balancing the scales.
Title: Not Such A Spoiled Brat 15 Jul 2008 12:47 am
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    Too sad that Dumble never bothered to check on Dursleys (under an invisibility spell or otherwise), Mila

    Author's Response: Yes, and Dumbeldore's oversight will cost them both, unfortunately. 
Title: Not Such A Spoiled Brat 08 Jul 2008 7:01 am
Reviewer: kittykat91419 (Signed) [Report This]
    OOC, inconsistent characterizations and way-too-fast changes of character.

    Author's Response: Please remember this is an AU fic, which means characters do NOT follow canon behavior.  That said, there are reasons for Petunia (I'm assuming you mean she's OOC) behaving towards Harry and Sev the way that she does, they are detailed in the next chapter.  If you mean Snape is acting OOC, also remember this is summer before GOF and there is none of the bitterness and hate between him and Harry that there is in later books like Phoenix and Hal-Blood Prince.  Plus, this is his son, and though he doesn't like Petunia, she would have no reason to lie to him about that, since having Harry in her home is a trial for her.  At the end of book 3 Snape protected Harry, Ron, and Hermione from a werewolf at the risk of his own life, I cannot imagine him just standing and watching while a fat abusive Muggle beat his son, especially given his history.
Title: Not Such A Spoiled Brat 21 May 2008 1:14 am
Reviewer: burns603 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oh that was a lovely chapter. I was thrilled when Sev blasted Vernon and can't wait to see what he does to them next! Keep it up!

    Author's Response: Thanks and the next chap is posted, so check it out!

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