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Title: Not Such A Spoiled Brat 21 May 2008 1:12 am
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow great chapter I can't wait to see what Sev does to them! Woohoo! Go Snape!

    Author's Response: Thanks and just wait it's coming!
Title: Not Such A Spoiled Brat 20 May 2008 8:37 pm
Reviewer: Elphaba (Signed) [Report This]
    Love it!!!!!

    Author's Response: Thanks and just wait till you see what's coming up next!
Title: Not Such A Spoiled Brat 20 May 2008 8:08 pm
Reviewer: sunsethill (Signed) [Report This]
    Ha! That's a wonderfully creative solution for retribution. I don't think I've ever seen that done. I wonder how much weight Dudley and Vernon will lose. ;-)

    Author's Response: Umm . . .it's only for a week, so I don't think it'll be all that much, but maybe it'll be incentive for them to go on a diet, huh? LOL!
Title: Not Such A Spoiled Brat 20 May 2008 5:04 pm
Reviewer: kazza (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Excellent story. Yay! Sev's solution is wonderful and the best way to teach Vernon a lesson. Although I do wonder if Vernon will learn anything.

    Author's Response: Probably not, but maybe it'll teach him to be wary of rousing a wizard's wrath.
Title: Not Such A Spoiled Brat 20 May 2008 3:18 pm
Reviewer: iris (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I realy like your story, hope you'll update soon

    Author's Response: Thanks and I'm working on the next chapter.
Title: Not Such A Spoiled Brat 20 May 2008 9:49 am
Reviewer: tish tosh (Signed) [Report This]
    oh wow. go severus

    Author's Response: What you said!
Title: Not Such A Spoiled Brat 20 May 2008 6:13 am
Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed) [Report This]
    Good, the Dursleys are going to get it.

    I rather hope that Severus would have stepped in even if Harry weren't his son.

    Author's Response: Oh yes they are! And Severus would have stopped Vernon even if Harry were not his relative, he wouldn't allow any child to be abused if he could help it.
Title: Not Such A Spoiled Brat 20 May 2008 5:28 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    WOW!!! That is so scary for Vernon I bet, but he really deserves it!! Wow! i have never seen this scenario before. great idea! Good job with the chapter. I love how protective Snape is being, while still kind of giving Harry his space.

    Author's Response: Yes, Vernon is going to get it good.  And Sev does protective very well, don't you think?
Title: Not Such A Spoiled Brat 20 May 2008 5:06 am
Reviewer: CrazyDragon (Signed) [Report This]
    Oooo, I *like* fics where Vernon gets his...! ::very large, toothy, evil dragon-grin:: This story is handled very nicely. Snape's obviously got a few years of bad habits regarding his treatment of Harry to get around, but personally witnessing what Harry's lived with was probably the single most important thing towards changing his view of the boy--especially with his own background, as Petunia told it.
    Hmmm...I wonder what Snape's going to say to Dumbledore, for leaving Harry there--no matter *whose* son he was... >=] Heh. I hope the Headmaster has good insurance on his office, if Snape finds out he knew anything of the abuse!

    Author's Response: And he will be getting it, trust me! And yes, witnessing the abuse for himself has changed Snape a good deal, as had the revelation that he is Harry's father.  As for Albus, God help the man if Severus finds out that he knew about what went on and did nothing is right! Can anyone say wizard posicle?
Title: Not Such A Spoiled Brat 20 May 2008 5:03 am
Reviewer: Keats (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Aunt Petunia really behaved like a caring and understanding aunt talking to harry not yelling or abusing in any manner...that was great, it was exactly what harry needed (a new aspect to their relationship can be developed). Without Vernon there she is pretty OK.
    It is good to teach Vernon and Dudley a lesson, but it is also important that Sev does not go overboard because sometimes two wrongs do not make a right and harry will be watching his father (yes he knows Prof Snape but he is no longer Prof but Dad) and learn from him -it will interesting the lesson harry will learn from Sev.

    Author's Response: Petunia has some pretty good reasons why she behaved the way she did towards Harry, as she will reveal in the upcoming chapter.  And Severus knows how to impart an object lesson, he really is a good teacher, a fact that Harry will learn once the upcoming week is done with. 

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