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Reviews For The Heir to Prince Manor
Author's Response: I'm a mythology buff, so I had to put him in there. LOL! And I don' t know where I got Mavis from, but I thought it fit perfectly. Thanks for reviewing!
Author's Response: All right, so glad you like this one!
Author's Response: Thank you, I try to make Severus similar to the books, but at the same time give him more of a background and eventually you will see him getting more paternal towards Harry and Draco as well!
Author's Response: yeah, i wanted to give him a different middle name and that seemed to fit nicely. As for that conversation, yes, it will need to be repeated over and over, as you'll see.
Author's Response: Thanks! I think my dialogue is one of my strong points, I like to listen to how a person says something as well as what they say.
Albus is mad, he is a meddling crazy old coot – the saying ‘the path to hell is paved with good intentions’ comes to mind, Albus has convinced himself that his actions are for the greater good, but his actions just hurt the people who he exploits. It is obvious he had Sev play dead only to get him away from Lily – just because she was not meant to be with a Slytherin but with a Gryffindor golden boy like James – it was for no other reason it had nothing to do with defeating Volde, but Albus may have convince himself in his mind that this was what was right. He has done the same with Harry, deliberately putting him in an abusive home for him to suffer – he risked Harry becoming an angry revengeful individual (I wonder if he left Tom Riddle in the orphanage for the same reason). Did Albus not consider that training Harry to use his power from early age would have made him into a more powerful wizard (or maybe he does not want a wizard even one dedicated to the light to be more powerful than himself)? I would advise that Sev goes and get Harry to be legally declared his son, because right now it is just Sev’s word and Albus is so vindictive (or delusional) that he may have Sev arrested for kidnapping (with Aunt Petunia in hiding, she may not know what is going on) and have him kept in Azkaban without trial (just like Sirius – I am convinced that he knew that Sirius was innocent – but just did not want him raising Harry as he would have raised harry in wealth and with love – and this would not have fit Albus’ plan for Harry), it would be all claimed to be for the greater good (especially now since Sev is no good to him as his status as a spy has been compromised). Author's Response: he should, but the rivalry between harry and Draco will not die so easily, unfortunately. As for Dumbledore, yes he is a manipulative old man here, as I'm following canon more than I usually do, and eventually Severus will go to the Ministry and file a formal claim of paternity.
Author's Response: No, that's not going to happen, though there will be plenty of ups and downs for them as they all struggle to become a real family.
still this is good! and i can barely wait for the next chapter! Author's Response: No, DD's okay, in the NA universe he's quite the good guy, but in this one I'm portraying him as clsoer to the canon portrait we learned of in Deathly Hallows. Only he's much more open about it here.
Author's Response: Thanks and I really love all your reviews!
It was a good conversation with Harry, but Severus has to remember that having a father is new to Harry and he doesn't want to share this time. I don't blame him. Author's Response: And he will. Severus does understand to a point, but he also is now responsible for Draco and he wants them to try and get along with each other. But it will take some getting used to, and there are some rocky times ahead. Hey, did you know I've finished Growing Pains? The last chapter was posted the other day, so if you want to R&R it....? |
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