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Reviews For The Heir to Prince Manor
Author's Response: oh good, somebody actually noticed I gave Draco a middle name. I wondered if anyone would, I figured he needed one. And you're right about the self-defense lessons, I was taught that in my karate classes.
Author's Response: I agree and hopefully they've learned their lesson!
I love my dear and am eagerly looking forward to more. Yours, Lady Jewels Snape. Author's Response: No you don't, and they're typical teenagers, always pushing the boundaries. They'll test him a few more times before they finally learn, silly kids!
loving the story Author's Response: Thanks and you'll see what happens with the nightmares.
Author's Response: You're right, Harry knew better than to mouth off to Vernon, but Severus is a different story--he shoots his mouth off to him right after Sev is hidden in the bedroom in chapter three, and once they move to the manor, and he realizes that Sev is nothing like Vernon, which occurs right after the incident with the summerdew, he feels more secure and will occasionally have an attitude with his father. That's typical adolsecent behavior, even the best behaved kids get snippy from time to time, and once Draco enters the picture, Harry starts fighting with him, and is angry at Severus for bringing Draco there, and so consequently he mouths off to him. I can recall several sections in OOTP where Harry simply runs off his mouth at everyone, his friends and his teachers, especially Dumbledore there at the end. Harry in this story has the Snape temper, toned down a few notches, and the Snape sarcastic mouth, which is what Severus is forever scolding him about. You'll see more of that side of him in future chapters.
Author's Response: You'll see! Just wait!
draco could have killed harry. i have a feeling that before long the boys will be having a heart to heart talk and discover just how much they are alike. great chapter! Author's Response: Yes, that's good thinking, and soon they will sit down and discuss their respective pasts. And yes, Sev was tough on them on purpose, he really wnats them to end the quarreling its driving him insane.
I really think that having to share a room is going to make them see things a little differently, and hopefully they'll start getting along better. It does seem like they decided to bury the hatchet, at least for a little while. I liked the idea that Harry didn't want to stick around for Draco's punishment, it really shows some form of maturity on his part. (Sev and the wooden spoon always makes me think he's channeling Molly Weasley, and makes me laugh). It sounds like Draco is going to have some Lucius horror stories to share soon. (I've been meaning to ask if you were going to get into any back story about what happened with Draco?). Keep up the awesome awesome work, thanks for the quick update, and please update again soon. It's really starting to get awesome. LES Author's Response: Yes, Draco's story will be revealed in a later chapter, and Harry will finally come to trust his foster brother and share his past as well, but not until something else happens first. Sev and that wooden spoon, it's a typical mother thing, i think, mine always used to threaten and sometimes use one on us when we were kids and were trying to beat each other senseless. But Draco did deserve the smacks considering he could've killed Harry with that kin-sa-dor technique. '
Author's Response: Yes, once they quit fighting and sit down and actually talk to each, they will discover that they've more in common than they thought.
Author's Response: Ha, that would've been good too, but Scorpia already did something similar in her fic so I didn't want to go down the exact same road. Plus, Severus doesn't believe in using coercive magic on children, that would only make them distrust him. |
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