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Title: Lost In the Dark 12 Nov 2022 8:53 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    I loved Dragon’s Wild, and the added notes were really fun! Severus’s response to Harry’s nightmare was very touching.
Title: Lost In the Dark 10 Aug 2013 7:48 am
Reviewer: beth (Anonymous) [Report This]
    this chapter is so adorable
Title: Lost In the Dark 08 Apr 2011 1:49 am
Reviewer: Phoenixa Nymphadora (Signed) [Report This]
    Blah, I told myself i'm going to try and stop commenting on stories so much because I get to drawn in and involved with it XD
    But darn your awesome writing for making me comment! Darn itttttt! hehehe
    I love it. I loved the Dragon's Wild game, mostly because being able to gamble away some punishments! Hahahaha, Draco is so Slytherin for suggesting that! Def. something I would have done! heheheh
    Poor Harry and his nightmares! Poor poor thing. : (
    Poor Draco, I know it shocked him to the freegin core to see Harry completely let down his guard and be so scared. I'm glad Draco sees that they both have been hurt before, maybe Draco will try and initiate some talking/bonding between them.
    If he and Harry can get along, more power to them! I couldn't imagine letting my guard down in front of my enemy or showing him fear and crying---much less sharing a room with him or (god please prevent it!)---bonding with him!!! *shudder*
    lol
    Once again,no complaints, just plenty of dramatics and praise. All hail Snapegirl and DaughterOfAres *bows*
    loool i'm such a n00b XD

    Author's Response:

    When I invented the Dragon's Wild game, it was because I always wondered why wizards didn't play more card games and because I like the idea of Sev, Draco, and Harry playing poker together, as well as allowing the kids to get out of some of their punishments early. Yes, that was a really Slytherin thing for Draco to suggest, but then, he's always been the Slytherin Prince.  Plus, it was how my family plays poker, instead of money we use notes too, or sometimes pennies, 'cause it's all for fun.  I could never play real poker, I'd be too stressed and lose it all.

    Harry's nightmares will be a source of trouble to him for awhile yet, until something happens and he can get help from . . . well you'll see.

    Draco will eventually start talking to Harry, but he still has a few issues to work out first. 

    True, Harry didn't want to break down, but sometimes our emotions overwhelm us and he really couldn't help himself. The nightmares are getting worse.

    Thanks, hope you like the next part.

Title: Lost In the Dark 10 Aug 2010 4:03 pm
Reviewer: Chucky (Signed) [Report This]
    I know it doesn't really matter but for some reason I'm channeling my inner Hermione and poker player and really HAVE to point out that at least in Poker Full House doesn't beat Four of a Kind. Only Straight Flush beats Four of a Kind (Royal Flush being a form of that obviously).
    Though I guess you could always say that it's different in Dragons Wild.

    I have to get back to reading the story now... ;-)
Title: Lost In the Dark 11 Jan 2010 4:44 am
Reviewer: Carol (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Poor Harry. I wanted to cry for him. I feel so bad for the poor boy but I liked the way that Draco reacted. I'm also glad that Harry had a chance to be a child for once with his father. And that his father had a chance to take care of his son the way he would have been able to had they known about each toher so long ago.

    Author's Response: Yes, exactly. I'm glad you understood Harry's reaction.  He's very damaged now and so he's not acting like a normal child would, and it does help that now he has Sev to turn to and Severus is happy to help his son with his problems because he regrets not being there for all those years.
Title: Lost In the Dark 03 Sep 2009 5:54 pm
Reviewer: N_Forest (Signed) [Report This]
    Dragons Wild sounds like a lot of fun. I think that next time I play poker with my siblings I'll suggest playing for chores. Harry's nightmare was exactly that, nightmarish. Great chapter!

    Author's Response: That's a good idea! I hope it works. We used to do that all the time in my house. Oh yes, poor Harry and his dreams. I'll focus more on the dreams later.
Title: Lost In the Dark 19 Aug 2008 8:31 pm
Reviewer: Mel (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Dragon's Wild was cool! I wanna play! let's invent a deck of cards for it. And those notes were a cool idea too.

    But Harry's nightmare was just awful!! I felt so bad for him. I'm glad Draco wasn't a prat either and he got Severus. Harry needs a good therapist, i think.

    Author's Response: He does and he'll be getting one, sort of.  You'll see what I mean later on.
Title: Lost In the Dark 17 Aug 2008 3:02 am
Reviewer: blackmagicwoman (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Loved the poker game, you're so creative! Nobody else makes up these things like you do, it's awesome! But I'm glad Draco got Severus and he came to get Harry, the poor kid! What can be done about these nightmares?

    Author's Response: You'll see what gets done about them, don't worry!  I'm happy you like some of the ideas I come up with, I try to make my stories unique.
Title: Lost In the Dark 29 Jun 2008 6:08 am
Reviewer: Elphaba (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Harry and finally Drake sees he isn't alone! Harry's turn is next!

    Author's Response: Yes, that's true and eventually they will all start getting along.
Title: Lost In the Dark 29 Jun 2008 1:42 am
Reviewer: ER (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Dragons Wild sounds fun. I learned how to play Chinese Rummy last week. It was fun. I came in third out of five, so I didn't do too bad for my first time playing. The nightmare scene was good too.

    Author's Response: That sounds cool, I've never played that.  Glad you liked this chapter, it was a bit intense for me to write.

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