| Title: Lost In the Dark
| 29 Jun 2008 12:28 am
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| Reviewer: Tsuby (Signed)
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Wow, this story gets better with every chapter! I've been reading it from the start, but I was so busy and my "internet time" was so scant that I could not review until now. I can see Harry and Draco quarrelling and Snape being driven crazy. It's really great!
Author's Response: Thank you! And there will be more quarreling and eventually they will come to a better understanding of each other.
| Title: Lost In the Dark
| 28 Jun 2008 5:45 pm
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| Reviewer: Lady Julie Snape (Anonymous)
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Dragons Wild - an interesting but very amusing twist.
I loved the dream. Poor Harry; all he ever does is suffer. I think that's a trait we writers share though - we just love to torture the poor boy.
Update soon, my dear. You know I love it.
Yours,
Lady Jewels Snape.
Author's Response: yeah, but I don't like to make him suffer as much as some, LOL! And I love happy endings, so you know the way this will end, right?
dragons wild sounds really fun. by the way, you keep substituting of for have. harry's nightmare was really horrible. but i suppose nightmares aren't meant to be nice. update soon please!
Author's Response: Yes, I know, it's dialect, I'm doing it on purpose. And the nightmares are a reflection of Harry's emotional state, which is very insecure and traumatized. But eventually he will get better with Severus's help. Thanks as always for your review!
That was sweet. I rated you ten - so add this many Zero's after it 00000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000
Author's Response: Wow! I'm very honored! You get a whole shipment of chocolate frogs and whatever else you want from Honeydukes. Just put it on Sev's tab! :)
| Title: Lost In the Dark
| 28 Jun 2008 5:12 am
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| Reviewer: Judy (Signed)
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Brilliant job! I was scared right along with harry, poor kid! And Sev did a great job of waking him and comforting him after too! It's not easy, dealing with a hysterical child. Dragons Wild sounds very very cool too. My kids would love it!
Author's Response: So was I, and I wrote it, LOL! I really don't like doing dark and scary so much, I'm more of an optimist person!
Wow! it was . . .incredible! I loved it! Especially the last line, that was beautiful!
Author's Response: aww! You're sweet and thanks so much for that comment!
| Title: Lost In the Dark
| 28 Jun 2008 5:04 am
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| Reviewer: blackmagicwoman (Anonymous)
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OMG! Absolutely amazing! I cried and I NEVER do that! Poor Harry, I hope he stops having those awful noghtmares soon. But the poker game was brilliant!
Author's Response: Wow really? I cry at sad stories and things all the time, I'm so sentimental. I bawled my head off after DH--too many people DIED, JKR! Anyway, thanks so much for your review. *hugs*
| Title: Lost In the Dark
| 28 Jun 2008 5:02 am
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| Reviewer: burns603 (Anonymous)
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I loved DragonsWild. Too bad it's not real, then me and my boys could play it! As for poor Harry, Sev needs to get him some therapy, I think. The poor kid's much too wound up and I felt so bad for him! What a chapter though! Amazing!
Author's Response: Thanks and I feel bad for Harry too! You're right, harry does need help and hopefully Severus can either help him himself or provide someone to help Harry recover from his disturbing mental dreams.
poor harry. love dragons wild.
i hope harry and draco get along better now. will you be carrying on once they get back to school? dont remember if ive already asked that.
Author's Response: No, you haven't. And I might do that, in a sequel, this one is supposed to focus on the summer and bonding with Sev & Draco. Glad you liked Dragons Wild, I should invent it for real...if I was millionaire, that is!
Dragons Wild sounded like tons of fun, I love the imagery of Severus playing poker. It was good to see the boys start to get along at least a little bit. I'm glad that even though the boys are being punished, Severus isn't stopping them from doing some things that are fun, like playing cards. He could have easily made them go to bed straight after cleaning up from dinner, so that was good to see. It'll be intresting to see if and what Harry says about his nightmare in the morning, if he decides to talk about it. It was nice to see Severus be so understanding and comforting especially since Harry was so terrifed. Really looking forward to what happens next. Keep up the awesome aweome work and please update again soon. LES
Author's Response: Me too, he'd have like the best poker face! And Draco and Harry should be getting along somewhat better come the next two chapters, though like any siblings, they will still have fights and all. True, Sev could've told them to go to bed right after dinner, but he doesn't want to seem like a total despot and he does want to spend time with the boys and do some things together as a family. I've never liked the fics where all Sev does is punish Harry and they never get to do some fun things like a real father and son would. The nightmare really frightened all of them and you'll see Harry's reaction in the next chapter!
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