The reassurance that Severus gave both boys was exactly what they needed. That was especially well written. Thanks so much.
I really like how Severus is handling Harry's issues. Nice job!!
I liked this chapter. It really showed how the boys relationship is developing. I hope they can become friends before Severus kills both of them and himself from having to listen to their disputes.
Author's Response: Yes their relationship is proceeding nicely but not fast enough for Severus, I think. Poor Sev. Being stuck with quarreling children is the worst.
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| 19 Aug 2008 8:37 pm
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| Reviewer: Mel (Anonymous)
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Brilliant part here. i could understand both boys' point of view and Severus's as well. Hopefully they will start getting along better now that they realize Snape loves them both. Can't wait to read Draco's story! This is so awesome!
Author's Response: Yes they will try and I'm glad you're enjoying this so much!
marvelous! Loved the interactione between them. They're finally becoming a real family!
Author's Response: I know, isn't it great! :)
| Title: Shame and Envy
| 30 Jun 2008 6:08 am
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| Reviewer: Judy (Signed)
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Yay! he finally talked to Severus and now he can begin to heal a little and gain back the self confidence he has lost. Draco too must now feel more secure now that he knows Sev loves him and Harry. Update ASAP!
Author's Response: Thank you, and now that they're getting along, Severus can finally have some peace!
| Title: Shame and Envy
| 30 Jun 2008 6:05 am
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| Reviewer: blackmagicwoman (Anonymous)
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Beautiful! Severus handled both boys with love and understanding, excellent! Can't wait to read about Draco's past.
Author's Response: I should have that chapter posted soon, thanks for reviewing, as always!
| Title: Shame and Envy
| 30 Jun 2008 6:03 am
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| Reviewer: burns603 (Anonymous)
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Wonderful chapter! They're finally getting to open up with each other and perhaps they'll start behaving and acting nicely!
Author's Response: Well, one can always hope, right? LOL!
| Title: Shame and Envy
| 30 Jun 2008 1:08 am
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| Reviewer: Jamie (Anonymous)
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I love this story. I love how Severus loves them both equally and I'm glad Harry told Severus what the dream was about. I can't wait until the next chapter. Keep up the good work. :)
Author's Response: Thanks and I should be posting the next one shortly!
ohh i do hope they can finnaly get along just act like real brothers.
good story so far.
Author's Response: They're working on it, believe me! Thanks for your review!
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