What a totally funny and heartwarming chapter end for the little family.
I'm surprised Harry didn't mention he tried to tell McGonagal and was sent away first year. Really great so far.
I'm surprised Harry didn't mention he tried to tell McGonagal and was sent away first year. Really great so far.
I loved hearing about Draco's life and all the things expected of him as a pureblood. The race at the end was awesome! I hope that there is more of Sev, Draco and Harry just having fun together.
Author's Response: There will be. Draco really had it harder than anyone, especially Harry realized. I loved that race even though they knocked Sev down. Finally they're getting along and learning about each other.
| Title: The Death Eater's Son
| 20 Aug 2008 1:54 am
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| Reviewer: Mel (Anonymous)
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OMG! i felt so bad for poor draco, but the way the two bicker back and forth really made me laugh. And the race at the end was brilliant, I nearly died laughing. Now on to harry's past!
Author's Response: Yes, Draco wasn't really the spoiled prince he acted like. And I had fun writing the bickering parts and the race at the end was just too funny.
| Title: The Death Eater's Son
| 02 Jul 2008 12:47 am
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| Reviewer: Judy (Signed)
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Great job! I was never a real fan of Draco, but you've made me like him and actually feel bad for him! Kudos to you! I can't wait to read about Harry's past!
Author's Response: Actually, neither was I, until i started writing this story, and decided to portray him in a different light. Glad you're liking this and you can read about Harry's past right now, since I've just posted the next chapter!
| Title: The Death Eater's Son
| 02 Jul 2008 12:45 am
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| Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed)
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Beautiful job here! I could feel the emotion coming from Draco as he was talking. . .the poor kid, what a way to grow up! Well, at least he's out of there and with people who love him now. The race was supurb, I was ROTFLMAO!!!
Updtae soon!
Author's Response: Yeah, at least he's got Severus, who loves him and I'm really glad you thought the boys crashing into Sev was funny, because I laughed when I wrote it! Oh yeah, I've updated!
| Title: The Death Eater's Son
| 02 Jul 2008 12:43 am
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| Reviewer: blackmagicwoman (Anonymous)
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Oooh candy and pumpkin juice1 I am so there, girl! Now, for my review. First off , let me say that this is the first time I've ever seen anyone do a sympathetic past for Draco before HBP, and do it so you really feel sorry for the way he was treated. The arranged marriage, the canings, the forced learning of curses and evil initiations, it all combined and it made me say, hell, he really had as bad a home life as Harry. I hope Harry sees this too.
The race was a classic father/sons bonding moment, I laughed myself off my chair, because I could just SEE that happening...LOL! :) What a wonderful story this is!
Author's Response: Aww, I think you're an awesome reviewer and I didn't realize that no one's ever done this for Draco before, i thought the Draco shippers would've done this a million times before. I felt he needed some sympathy too, since most of the time he's portrayed as the nasty spoiled brat. And the race was a great bonding opportunity.
| Title: The Death Eater's Son
| 02 Jul 2008 12:38 am
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| Reviewer: burns603 (Anonymous)
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I actually felt bad for Draco here, and I normally can't stand him, but the way you wrote this...I really feel sorry for the kid and hope he can turn his life around now that he's living with Sev & Harry. The race was great, especially knocking Sev flat--LOL!
Author's Response: it's a first for me too, since my normal portrayal of Draco is as an evil character, like his father Lucius. But I'm enjoying writing this from a different perspective and now I actually am fond of the brat.
that was a great chapter, draco really revealed alot about his home life, i really hope draco hasn't got to marry pansy, the race was awesome and a very brotherly thing to do and seemed to bring them closer
Author's Response: Yes he did and it's Harry's turn next. They will be getting closer as they now realize that Sev was right when he said they really do have a lot in common.
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