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Reviews For The Heir to Prince Manor
Author's Response: The beginning of this chapter is meant to show more bonding between Severus and his sons and also show how they can use martial arts as well as magic to defend themselves. This will be important later on in this book, when they need to fight enemies, and it is detailed to show how difficult it is to master and present Severus as something other than a mere Potions Master, and teach the boys necessary discipline and combat techniques that they'll need later on. Simply saying that they praciced so and so does not give readers a sense of how much dedication and practice is needed to master kin-sa-dor, and how much time it took Severus to become a master. It needs to be shown. Many readers had questions for me about this martial arts thing I invented, so this chapter was designed to answer them and provide some more backstory on Severus and his teacher, as well as privide a safe outlet for the boys to spar against each other without killing each other.
Author's Response: No, my version doesn't. Yes, he took the Mark, but he was never a real DE, he never joined them except to spy upon them at Albus's urging. Yes, he heard the prophecy, but couldn't save Lily in time. Or Harry either.
Author's Response: It was and Sev ought to be rewarded for doing it at all.
Author's Response: So would I, for sure!
The family's sleeping. Adorable and, you know what? they deserve it. The lesson was very interesting and I loved your reference to the grace of the Snape line. I apologize for not reviewing my dear. Excuses, excuses, excuses. But I'm going to give you one anyway. We're moving so we have to get everything ready for sale and it's been very hectic. I will read the next few chapters when I can. Right now, I really need to finish chapter 3 of Breaking Dawn before someone decides it's time to hunt me down and roast me alive. Yours, Jewels. Author's Response: That's all right. Good luck with your move and all. And keep writing I really want to read your next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you! The boys will have some other interesting adventures at the manor before going back to Hogwarts, so be prepared!
Author's Response: You're very welcome. For this chapter I used a lot of my brother's advice, as he's the martial arts expert in my family. He's trained in three disicplines, holding master titles in two, kung fu and ninjitsu and he also knows Jeet Kun Do, the martial art form that Bruce Lee invented. I asked him a bunch of questions and then took what he told me and wrote this chapter. He said that it would be unrealistic if I had any student advance too fast, since martial arts takes time, even if you've a natural bent for it.
Author's Response: Thank you, my brother is a ninjitsu and kungfu master so he helped me with this one! And Severus has endured a lot as a spy, poor thing!
Author's Response: Wow really! I'm glad it seemed realistic to you! As for being a spy, you know you see it on TV, but I doubt it's really like that in the real world. |
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