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Title: Shimmerling In the Garden 14 Nov 2022 1:17 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    I absolutely love this universe you’ve created, with merlinnas, kin-sa-dor, and shimmerlings!
Title: Shimmerling In the Garden 08 Apr 2011 8:12 am
Reviewer: Phoenixa Nymphadora (Signed) [Report This]
    "Insanity shouldn't set in this early" lol haha!
    Great chapter! I want a Shimmerling : (
    The only complaint I have is about the punishment. It seems so freegin long. It's been almost a month since his punishment started and he and Draco have been behaving and doing their chores, they should be let off for good behavior : (
    Once a child is punished for a certain amount of time, they start to forget what they are being punished for.
    Oi! See thissss is why i've been trying not to comment on stories...tsktsk lol. I get all super involved in the story like it's real life.
    That just means you're an epic writer who is bringing out my compassioin and other emotions...like my spidey senses *tingle tingle* lol...i'm so weird. haha!
    So glad I can click "next" and don't have to wait on these cliffhangers weeeeeeeeee!!! XD

    Author's Response:

    It does, but remember, they've only been under punishment for around 2 weeks, and they did bring it upon themselves.  Severus is being somewhat lenient by allowing the boys to use their IOU's to mitigate their sentence.  Yes, they are learning how to get along, but then that is the whole purpose of this punishment. They are also learning useful life lessons, like consequences for actions, how to appreciate how easy magic makes things, like laundry ( I wish I had magic to clean my house after a hard day at work!), and how to use different ingredients in potions and brew more advanced drafs than on their syllabus at school, plus how to cook.  Trust me, Draco and Harry know exactly why they're being punished, Sev reminds them every day. As for letting them off, Sev can't do that, he has to be consistent.  Although there may come a time when he considers it due to someone's influence. I won't mention any more about it now, you'll see what I mean later.

    Yeah, it's good not to have to wait, I agree.

Title: Shimmerling In the Garden 18 Feb 2010 11:03 pm
Reviewer: CarlinPaddy (Signed) [Report This]
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Title: Shimmerling In the Garden 18 Feb 2010 11:02 pm
Reviewer: CarlinPaddy (Signed) [Report This]
    10
Title: Shimmerling In the Garden 03 Sep 2009 5:53 pm
Reviewer: N_Forest (Signed) [Report This]
    Exciting! It would be awesome to read about a Quidditch match between Harry, Draco and Severus. And I can't wait to learn more about the shimmerling

    Author's Response: yeah I might have to work that in for the sequel though. The shimmerling is one of my better creations, as you'll see.
Title: Shimmerling In the Garden 20 Aug 2008 2:14 am
Reviewer: Mel (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I'm glad to see Harry flying again. Hurry and save the shimmerling, I don't want it to die, please?

    Author's Response: You'll see what happens to the shimmerling next, trust me.
Title: Shimmerling In the Garden 16 Jul 2008 8:50 pm
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    OMG, a shimmerling dying. Don't wants it to die *cries* Mila

    Author's Response: Don't worry, just read the next chapter!
Title: Shimmerling In the Garden 07 Jul 2008 6:35 pm
Reviewer: dancingkatz (Signed) [Report This]
    A shimmerling? What a lovely name. If anyone can save th fae it's Severus, I'm sure. I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter (as I have the others) and look forward to teh next one.

    Author's Response: Thanks, it took me an hour to come up with one.  And yes, we all know how good our professor is at saving things! Go Sev! The next chapter will deal with healing spells, as I'm sure you've guessed.
Title: Shimmerling In the Garden 07 Jul 2008 5:43 pm
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    The only complaint I have--it was too short! And I want to find out more! Please, please update as soon as possible.*hugs*

    Author's Response: Aww, I'll make the next one longer, I promise! 
Title: Shimmerling In the Garden 07 Jul 2008 5:40 pm
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Glad to see harry got his broom back, even if it were only for a day. I really want to find out what the shimmerling is and how it got there. Update soon!

    Author's Response: All your questions will be answered soon!

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