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Reviews For The Heir to Prince Manor
Great chapter! I want a Shimmerling : ( The only complaint I have is about the punishment. It seems so freegin long. It's been almost a month since his punishment started and he and Draco have been behaving and doing their chores, they should be let off for good behavior : ( Once a child is punished for a certain amount of time, they start to forget what they are being punished for. Oi! See thissss is why i've been trying not to comment on stories...tsktsk lol. I get all super involved in the story like it's real life. That just means you're an epic writer who is bringing out my compassioin and other emotions...like my spidey senses *tingle tingle* lol...i'm so weird. haha! So glad I can click "next" and don't have to wait on these cliffhangers weeeeeeeeee!!! XD Author's Response: It does, but remember, they've only been under punishment for around 2 weeks, and they did bring it upon themselves. Severus is being somewhat lenient by allowing the boys to use their IOU's to mitigate their sentence. Yes, they are learning how to get along, but then that is the whole purpose of this punishment. They are also learning useful life lessons, like consequences for actions, how to appreciate how easy magic makes things, like laundry ( I wish I had magic to clean my house after a hard day at work!), and how to use different ingredients in potions and brew more advanced drafs than on their syllabus at school, plus how to cook. Trust me, Draco and Harry know exactly why they're being punished, Sev reminds them every day. As for letting them off, Sev can't do that, he has to be consistent. Although there may come a time when he considers it due to someone's influence. I won't mention any more about it now, you'll see what I mean later. Yeah, it's good not to have to wait, I agree.
Author's Response: yeah I might have to work that in for the sequel though. The shimmerling is one of my better creations, as you'll see.
Author's Response: You'll see what happens to the shimmerling next, trust me.
Author's Response: Don't worry, just read the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks, it took me an hour to come up with one. And yes, we all know how good our professor is at saving things! Go Sev! The next chapter will deal with healing spells, as I'm sure you've guessed.
Author's Response: Aww, I'll make the next one longer, I promise!
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