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Title: Smidgen's Solution 14 Nov 2022 4:17 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    It’s so healing that Harry is unraveling all of his major fears personified.
Title: Smidgen's Solution 08 Apr 2011 6:44 pm
Reviewer: Phoenixa Nymphadora (Signed) [Report This]
    Awww, that made me feel all fuzzy inside! I'm a bit sad about the James thing. I hoped that maybe Harry could place both he and Severus in the same light and love them both equally, but I see that is not possible with the memory of when he was 13 months.
    This story is so making me want to go Shimmerling hunting until I find one ^_^
    It would be too epic to have a Shimmerling take up residence in my home!
    I like how Harry once again, initiated contact with Sev and hugged him. Sev needed that. He doesn't know it yet, but it seems that he is doing what Harry was doing to himself. He feels bad about betraying Lily to the Dark Lord, and he won't allow himself to be loved. He thinks he deserves to be treated wrong. Poor Sev. I'm so glad that he, Harry and Draco are becoming such a tight knit family. I was so excited to see Draco and Petunia come up with the other faces of people that loved Harry! I was like yayyyyyy *does a jig*!!!! lol I'm so glad Draco and Harry are getting alone!!! I'm not a Draco lover (or liker, for that matter), but in stories like this, the little brat grows on me! lol XD Great chapter! Can't wait to see the Vernon dementor, he seems worse than ol' moldy Voldy to me!
Title: Smidgen's Solution 20 Aug 2008 3:05 am
Reviewer: Mel (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Whoo-hoo! I loved this chapter it was like so incredible! The dreams and all, oh my God! Can't wait to see what happens next.

    Author's Response: yeah, they were intense, weren't they? Hope you like the rest!
Title: Smidgen's Solution 13 Jul 2008 2:46 am
Reviewer: Lady Julie Snape (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Well, I have to write my review again because my computer froze on me earlier when I was reading it. ;)

    I'm very glad to see Harry confronting his fears and realizing that he ::grounds teeth:: is. not. alone. ::grins:: And Severus should not be ashamed of receiving comfort from his sons! ::glares at the pair:: A relationship works both ways you know!

    Ok, off to read one more chapter and then I'm going to bed.

    ::sidles out the door while still singing high-ho::

    -- I'm glad you like my reviews! I know how important it is to feel appreciated. Believe me, I'm a sensitive little person and that's the main reason I haven't updated - I completely lost confidence in myself. But, thanks to someone kicking me, I finally got my head back in the game.

    ::bows before the great Lady Snapegirl:: I would be most honored to read your story and I'm thrilled that you would want me to. ::grins widely::

    Byesies for now.
    ::waggles fingers::

    Toodles!

    Author's Response:

    yes, both harry and Severus have issues they need to resolve and so does Draco, but I'm getting to him later, as you'll see.  I LOVE your reviews and I LOVE your story too, so don't stop writing just because a few yahoos respond stupidly to your work, some of them did that to me on Hide Yourself From A Prisoner, saying they didn't like Aria Lupin.  Well too bad, 'cause Aria stays and is a major part of that series, from that book to the last.

    As for my other story, email me & I'll send it.

Title: Smidgen's Solution 11 Jul 2008 6:18 pm
Reviewer: slytherensangel26 (Signed) [Report This]
    very chilling!

    you never cese to amze me!

    can't wait for the next one!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks, Amy!

     

    Just wait for the next one, it's even scarier!

Title: Smidgen's Solution 11 Jul 2008 5:19 pm
Reviewer: dancingkatz (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter! The sessions were wonderful but hte best part was the ending. "I forgive you too," That was just... I can't coherently explain how readign that made me feel. All I can say is that I'm smiling so wide that my face is going to crack at the same time I want to cry because it is so moving. Bravo! I wish I could give you an 11.

    Author's Response: Wow! Thanks! I'm delighted you found that part so moving, it was my favorite part too.  I figured after all he'd been through, Sev deserved a hug from his son too! And he needed to hear from Harry's own mouth that his son could forgive him for not saving his mother, it really meant more than words could say.
Title: Smidgen's Solution 11 Jul 2008 5:07 pm
Reviewer: iluvchocs (Signed) [Report This]
    Great job on this chapter. I really liked your portrayal of James Potter; it made a lot of sense. True, canon says he matured, but he wound up having a kid at around 20 years old, and for someone who is used to being able to charm his way through life (and is fairly arrogant), it makes sense that he'd only want to participate in the 'fun' parts of being a parent.

    Author's Response: Oh good, then I wasn't being overly harsh with my portrayal, because I've always pictured James as being an arrogant spoiled playboy who had a good deal of maturing to do, and somehow I never quite bought the whole idea that he suddenly went from a bored spoiled bully that tormented Severus because he was there to this wonderful hero in what--two years? I figured there had to be some kind of life altering thing that happened to make him change . . .or perhaps he never changed and people simply chose to forget about how he really was and make him into some kind of paragon after he died facing Voldemort.  I know plenty of real people who behave just like James did, though raising a child does tend to mature you if you let it.
Title: Smidgen's Solution 11 Jul 2008 2:07 pm
Reviewer: summergirl36 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    A new story!! Don't know how I missed this one! I'm such a ditz! it's awesome, but then you already knew I was going to write that, didn't you! LOL! I really love Draco in this and normally I can't stand him. I want to see Harry give Vernon what for next!

    Author's Response: yeah! *laughs* I normally don't care for draco, but I decided to give him a makeover in this story and now he's grown on me.
Title: Smidgen's Solution 11 Jul 2008 2:04 pm
Reviewer: blackmagicwoman (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Yeah! *punches fist in the air* You rock! Actually this whole story does! I wish it would never end. LOL! Can't wait to see what happens now, it ought to be good!

    Author's Response: Thank you! You're so kind and I hope you'll like the next part. 
Title: Smidgen's Solution 11 Jul 2008 2:01 pm
Reviewer: burns603 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I loved the last part with Harry hugging Sev, aww! Sev needs lots of hugs! And the part with the dreams was awesome too! More More More!!!

    Author's Response: He surely does! and I've jsut posted a new chapter.

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