| Title: The Most Important Thing
| 19 Jul 2008 5:09 pm
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| Reviewer: Lady Julie Snape (Anonymous)
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::growls as fingers curl around a glass carafe and flings it at the wall::
May I /please/ kill Tobias and Micah? How /dare/ they treat Severus Snape in such a way?! If I was there... someone would most definitely die and it would not be Severus - oops, my apoglogies, Sev.
It was a chapter well worth the read, my dear. I cannot wait to meet Sarai - she seems interesting and I have the feeling she'll remind me of Lily in some way. (I can't write Lily at all.)
Update soon, darling, I'm looking for more, as always!
Love,
Jewels. ;)
Author's Response: You're not the only one who wants to kill them. *Grrr* I felt like unleashing a manticore on them myself. As for Sarai, she'll be arriving in two chapters and she is a little like Lily, but also very much her own unique person.
| Title: The Most Important Thing
| 19 Jul 2008 1:43 pm
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| Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed)
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It was marvelous! I nearly cried when I read the line where Severus says, "Only three people, Smidgen." who ever cared for him and accepted him the way he was, and two of them were dead. Poor guy! I'd like to take Tobias apart and Micah too for that matter! And I loved the last part!
Author's Response: I know . . .so sad, right? I agree with you about T & M too! Thanks for reviewing!
I love this story. I was happey to see Smidgen could help not only Harry but start to help Severus as well. That last two sentences are sooooooooo true. I believe it with all my heart. Is Sarai coming soon? Another great chapter. Update soon your chapter end note saying what is next intrigues me. :)
Author's Response: You'll be seeing Sarai in . . .ummm two chapters I believe! And you're right about the last two sentences, I'm a firm believer in that as well. If you're not happy with what you do, then it doesn't matter what kind of money you make or where you live or whatever, you're miserable. So you might as well do what you love and to heck with everything.
awwww
loving it
smidgen is brill
Author's Response: She sure is! Aren't you glad they saved her?
| Title: The Most Important Thing
| 19 Jul 2008 6:34 am
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| Reviewer: Judy (Signed)
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I loved the way you showed how cruel and degrading things in Sev's past has shaped him and I hope he will take Smidgen's words to heart and stop blaming himself and accept himself for who he is.
Author's Response: So do I, the poor man needs to quit beating himself up!
| Title: The Most Important Thing
| 19 Jul 2008 6:32 am
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| Reviewer: burns603 (Anonymous)
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Aww, poor Sev! You can't help but feel bad for the man, he's had such a tough life. I'm really glad he has a friend like Smidgen though, he could use a few more like her.
Author's Response: Yes he certainly has and he could sue more friends like that. In fact you'll be meeting another one in a few chapters.
| Title: The Most Important Thing
| 19 Jul 2008 6:30 am
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| Reviewer: blackmagicwoman (Anonymous)
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This story just keeps getting better and better. I felt so bad for Severus guilt is always the worst emotion to deal with especially guilt over your child. Can somebody switch Tobias into next week? And Sev's grandfather was a miserable old bastard too, no wonder the man has a complex! I loved the way he asked Smidgen to call him Sev, aww! And the last line was brilliant!
Author's Response: I know, poor Sev, we writers just love to make him suffer! Well, not me so much, at least I tend to give him a happy ending! :) So glad you're enjoying!
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