LOL I love the mudfight! I've been lmao! Thanks for another wonderful chapter. The names for the owlets are great and I just thought I'd die when Draco just came out with the dating Hermione line. Hmmmm....wonder if he even stands a chance after how mean he's been. I love that Sarai caught Severus playing in the mud with his sons. I can't wait to read what happens next.
Author's Response: Who knows? perhaps if Hermione thinks that Draco has changed, she might give him the time of day. I don't see her as the type to nurse a grudge. The mudfight was a blast . . .and I just had to catch Sev off-guard that way, it was too funny! And the next chapter's up, so you can see what Sarai is like.
yay!!!! VERY interesting
Author's Response: Thanks, hope you like the next part too!
| Title: A Bit of Mud and Water
| 27 Jul 2008 7:58 pm
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| Reviewer: Nightshade (Anonymous)
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Please update soon! I can't wait for more. Great job!
Author's Response: Thank you, I've jsut updated in fact!
| Title: A Bit of Mud and Water
| 27 Jul 2008 1:32 am
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| Reviewer: Judy (Signed)
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Loved it! The dynamics between the three are really great and it shows. It's taken them a long time to get this far but that's the way it should be.
Author's Response: It has, but that's jsut how it goes sometimes.
| Title: A Bit of Mud and Water
| 27 Jul 2008 1:30 am
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| Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed)
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Brilliant! I love the way the boys argue and then get along, it's so typical of kids that age--they fight one minute and the next are best friends. The owls have wonderful names and I love the mudfight. it's about time Sev went to play wit his sons! Update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks and you're absolutely right about teenagers. They all seem to behave that way, at least in my family where we have a lot of cousins around the same age.
| Title: A Bit of Mud and Water
| 27 Jul 2008 1:27 am
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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Wow! This was great and I love the idea of Draco and Hermione! The mudfight was wicked too!
Author's Response: Thanks and I hope you like the rest!
| Title: A Bit of Mud and Water
| 27 Jul 2008 1:25 am
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| Reviewer: blackmagicwoman (Anonymous)
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Aww, that was the best chapter yet! Hooray, Sev's finally playing with his sons! But ih, is he embarrassed at being seen by his teacher that way!
Author's Response: Yeah, but he'll ge tover it, LOL!
| Title: A Bit of Mud and Water
| 27 Jul 2008 1:23 am
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| Reviewer: burns603 (Anonymous)
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Fabulous chapter! Loved the names of the owls and the mud fight was just hilarious! Can't wait to meet Sarai!
Author's Response: Thanks and you can meet Sarai next chapter! I think you'll like her.
| Title: A Bit of Mud and Water
| 26 Jul 2008 9:00 pm
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| Reviewer: kyzhart (Anonymous)
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I love this fic. I like that you illustrate life lessons and how they each gradually change. I think it is very unique to have Sev linked to the Fae.
Author's Response: Thanks, I try to do different things with the characters in each of my stories, so they all have different premises and I like putting them in different situations so that they can learn something, because that's how we grow.
oh i loved the mud fight, it was awesome and severus joining in was even better, made it seem like they were a normal happy family who had mud fights all the time, keep this up
Author's Response: I figured they all needed some time to play and have fun, like a regular family.
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