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Title: A Bit of Mud and Water 26 Jul 2008 7:04 pm
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    loved the idea of a mud fight! it made me chuckle to see sev joining in and laughing, great chapter

    Author's Response: Yeah, every so often the Potions Master lets himself become a kid again, and play with his sons. 
Title: A Bit of Mud and Water 26 Jul 2008 6:44 pm
Reviewer: Lady Julie Snape (Anonymous) [Report This]
    ::claps hands like a madwoman::

    Okay, Sarai is in the picture. Can't wait to meet her. What does she look like? ::grins:: Can't wait to see what sort of mischief the boys will get into with her around. ::rubs fake beard:: I wonder...

    The mud war was a brilliant and fun twist to an already amazing story. Although I can just see Severus turning bright red with embarrassment in front of his ::cough cough:: friend.

    Update soon my dear, you know how much I love it.

    Toodles.
    Jewels.

    ::waggles fingers::

    Author's Response: You'll find out what she looks like in the next chapter.  And the boys will learn some new things about the fae and Severus too.  And yes, Sev was quite red underneath that coating of mud,ha ha!
Title: A Bit of Mud and Water 26 Jul 2008 12:03 pm
Reviewer: Dragonanzar (Signed) [Report This]
    now THAT was funny! severus was so embarrased when sarai came up and saw him covered in mud wasn't he?

    Author's Response: He was blushing madly underneath that coating of mud, yes! *snickers uncontrollably*
Title: A Bit of Mud and Water 26 Jul 2008 8:12 am
Reviewer: slytherensangel26 (Signed) [Report This]
    ooh i can't wait! love the mud fight...very interesting!

    love the owl names to!

    you are awesome!

    Author's Response: Aww, you're sweet Amy! It was hard coming up with names for the owlets, I had to try and figure out what had and hadn't been used before.
Title: A Bit of Mud and Water 26 Jul 2008 7:12 am
Reviewer: fanficaholic (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Love this story!

    Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: A Bit of Mud and Water 26 Jul 2008 5:28 am
Reviewer: Keats (Signed) [Report This]
    love it the three needed some carefree fun. happy to meet Sarai looking forward to her visit

    Author's Response: Yes they all needed time to relax and just have fun like normal people.
Title: A Bit of Mud and Water 26 Jul 2008 5:05 am
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    Good names for the owls, glad the guys finally agreed on something. It was funny to hear them go at each other about how ‘stupid’ and ‘horrible’ the others suggestions were :). Then they go off and argue about Quidditch! Oi, their comments about veela were so typical for guys *rolls eyes* Though it would be great if they could go see the World Cup.

    The mud fight was great! The two really messed the other one up, lol. It was even better when Sev showed up and joined, more and more chaos! Harry and Draco were either brave or insane to pull those stunts on him :). Seems Sarai finally showed up, can't wait for the next chapter to read about her.

    P.S. Uh, is this going to turn into a Dramione? Because, no offense, but I don't like the paring. I prefer Hermione with Ron. I do find it funny that Draco likes her though, talk about a shock to poor Harry, lol.

    Author's Response: Yeah they're just two typical teenagers, magic notwithstanding.  And I wanted the two to have some fun with Severus, who does have a sense of humor, and yes Sarai is now here--yay! As for anything happening between Draco and Hermione, I'm not sure if it'll ever go past the crush stage or not, right now he can't even bring himself to speak to her and there's a lot of bad moments she would have to get past if they were to start getting serious, and I'm not even going to go there right now. 
Title: A Bit of Mud and Water 26 Jul 2008 2:08 am
Reviewer: Devilishlycute (Signed) [Report This]
    *giggles* what a way to be caught by your former teacher eh. Great chapter. Can't wait for the next chapter.

    Author's Response: Yeah, not exactly the picture Severus wanted to present, but oh well.  Sarai's a good sport though!
Title: A Bit of Mud and Water 26 Jul 2008 1:22 am
Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed) [Report This]
    I knew the minute you wrote the words "mud" and "weed" that a mudfight was going to occur. It was as natural as the sun rising in the east.

    I am glad that Severus got to play.

    Author's Response: Yup, it was.  I love family fun like that, and I had to give Severus a chance to play too, since he never had much of a childhood either and they all needed a break.
Title: A Bit of Mud and Water 26 Jul 2008 1:13 am
Reviewer: tish tosh (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh wow. Loved the mud fight absolutly brilliant!!!!!! Nice to see sev with his hair down for once.
    Also draco liking Hermione. That was a surprise. Looking forward to seeing what you do with that.

    Author's Response: Yeah, every so often that mischievous side comes out in Severus and says let me play too! So I did.  And I figured it would be funny if Draco secretly liked Hermione, more about that later, though!

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