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Reviews For The Heir to Prince Manor
Author's Response: She's not as perfect as you think, LOL! But she does adore Sev. Who wouldn't??
Author's Response: Okay, read away! I love Sarai too!
Author's Response: Yes, she can be, but she can also be a very good friend, as you'll see in the next chapter. And no, you definitely don't want to get her mad, she can be very dangerous. But then again, so can Severus when he's mad.
Author's Response: Thanks and please keep reading!
I like Sarai, she seems like a really respectable and caring person. I think that she makes a nice match for Sev, now that Lily is gone. At first I shared Harry's thoughts about them being related, but it's true that they are very distant so there is no harm. I think that it would be great if the boys shared their owlets! I have a suspicion that Harry will end up giving Frost to Sarai, which would be nice :). There is something that confuses me though and that is Pigwidgeon; Ron received Pig from Sirius to replace Scabbers on the train ride back home after 3rd year, yet you had Harry mention that Ron has always wanted his own owl. Now, Ron can still definitely have Zephyr, (especially since Pig is always so hyper and clumsy!) I think that would be really nice, but what I wanted to know is what happened to Pig? Anyway, next chapter sounds really interesting! It's bound to be exciting, hope to read it soon :). P.S. I would be fine if Draco's feelings for Hermione stay as a crush, I can deal with that. Author's Response: There's a simple explanation for that, Ron gives Pig to Ginny and keeps Zephyr.
Author's Response: Maybe and maybe not. They've matured a lot over the summer, and most of their jealousy had its roots in the rivalry that went on during school, plus the fact that each of them never had a real father figure and were scared to lose him to the "enemy" so to speak. However, Sarai doesn't live with them, is visiting, and while it is awkward at first and confusing, for Harry especially, to think that his father is actually invovled with a lady, the level of jealousy isn't as high. Yes, Severus did hug her at first, but he hasn't kissed her at all in front of the boys, the first kiss was shared while they were still outside, and they are being discreet, keeping the PDA's down to looks while the kids are present. Neither of the boys has ever heard Sev tell Sarai he loves her either, though it is implied, they don't say it that often and if they do it's usually in private. However, in the next chapter, Harry will have two separate talks about Sev's relationship, one with his father, and the other with Smidgen, who has her own advice to give, which will help quell some of the anxiousness. Plus Sarai herself spends a good deal of time with them and helps them smooth over some rough spots with Sev, so they come to regard her as an ally rather than an enemy. It could have been different if she moved in with them, but that doesn't happen, and her relationship with Harry & Draco can grow gradually.
What's a chimera? Ok, so I was slightly off about the relationship - or was I bang on? I don't remember. ::grins:: I think Severus and Sarai deserve each other. Is there going to be jealousy on Harry and Draco's part? I hope there is. ::grins wickedly:: I have a feeling that Sarai would get along with Phil and Julie just fine. ::nods then lightbulb flashes:: I wonder how Sarai would react to meeting a vampire in the first place... depending on your vampires, of course. And don't be offended! Your story, I'm just brainstorming outloud 'cause I'm a freak. ::grins:: Brilliant, very brilliant chapter, my dear. I am eagerly looking forward to more! ::waggles fingers:: Byesies for now. - Oh! I saw The Dark Knight three times already. I LOVED it! Go see it NOW! ::winks:: Author's Response: Julie,
A chimera is a monster from Greek mythology, it has three heads, a lion, a goat, and a dragon, and also a snake for a tail all attached to a lion's body with wings. It's dragon head can breathe fire and the goat head can breathe poison gas. Greek mythology had the hero Bellerophon fight the chimera on the back of Pegasus and kill it with magic arrows. My chimeras are similar to those in myth. You predicted that Severus and Sarai would be in love, so that was good! As for the jealousy, just wait and see. it might not be as bad as you think! I'm sure Sarai would get along with Phil and Julie or a good vampire, like those in your story. I plan on seeing DK very soon! And Mamma Mia too! Are you ready for Breaking Dawn?? It's coming out Saturday!!
Author's Response: Yes Balin is very much an immature young man, he's around twenty-one in human years and just full of himself. Sarai adores Severus and vice versa, they have a very meaningful relationship, she is one of the few Sev has ever allowed inside his mind and into his heart as well. As for the hunt, there is an unexpected surprise that occurs, you'll see what happens next chapter. Lots of dangerous things lurk in the Realm of Faerie.
Author's Response: Thank you! You'll be seeing a lot more of her too. |
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