That was quite an action-packed fight! Really well done. I loved the chapter end.
| Title: In A Dark Dark Wood
| 21 Aug 2008 7:08 am
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| Reviewer: Mel (Anonymous)
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The battle was wicked! I'm so glad no one died and the evil fae got stomped into the dirt. And I'm glad Draco is well and they're all happy to be together.
Author's Response: I love it when everyone good surivives a battle. I don't really like killing anyone off, unless they're bad guys.
| Title: In A Dark Dark Wood
| 13 Aug 2008 8:09 pm
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| Reviewer: Jamie (Anonymous)
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I'm glad everybody is alright. :)
Author's Response: Yeah, isn't it great?
| Title: In A Dark Dark Wood
| 04 Aug 2008 9:54 pm
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| Reviewer: slytherensangel26 (Anonymous)
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nice job ! awesome work!
Author's Response: Thanks, Amy!
i really like sarai. she shares a few characteristics with a character i made up, and i love her. please update soon.
Author's Response: yeah she's one of my faves, she's a good match for Severus.
cool. loved the fight of the unseelie
Author's Response: Thanks and there will be more surprises coming up!
This chapter sure was full of action! Those Unseelie and dark creatures sound horrible, I'm glad they were taken to the curb! Great battle scenes, I could picture everything perfectly.
I really like the ideas you have for the fae realm, very creative. The animals and their personalities are great and I think it's cool you created some form of villain. Hope to read more soon, this story is fun to read ^_^
Author's Response: The darkhounds and the Inseelie warriors are horrible, and they'll be back if and when I ever do a sequel to this. They're the Seelie Court's ancient enemies and they are always trying to find ways into the Deepwood and kill and maima innocents there. I loved having the elvensteeds talk and interact with their riders and I might do some more with them as well in the future, this was just a taste of the fae realm.
This is such an awesome story! I wish this could be published. Can't wait for the next part. I hope Sirius is answering Harry--finally.
Author's Response: Aw, thanks! You'll see who the letters are from, don't worry.
that chapter was all out action and i loved it, the fight was awesome, harry did well in trying to heal draco and severus and sarai were great in the confrontation, i am so pleased draco survived
Author's Response: All right! I really like a good fight or two in some of my stories, because you need some action to round out a story.
| Title: In A Dark Dark Wood
| 02 Aug 2008 2:48 pm
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| Reviewer: Judy (Signed)
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Now THAT was incredible! I loved the fight, it was very vivid and real and so was the aftermath, with Severus talking and keeping watch over Draco & harry and Sarai as well. This story is an excellent piece of work.
Author's Response: Thanks and I really enjoy my action scenes, I like to get my characters' blood pumping and wreak some havoc on some bad guy's ass.
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