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Title: In A Dark Dark Wood 02 Aug 2008 2:46 pm
Reviewer: burns603 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    The fight was marvelous! I'm glad they kicked the raiders butts. But I loved the way draco and Sev had their moment to bond afterwards. They really needed that. Poor draco! He got royally knocked all over didn't he?

    Author's Response: Yeah, he did, but sometimes that's the price you pay when you engage in battle.  Lucky harry was there to save him, huh?
Title: In A Dark Dark Wood 02 Aug 2008 8:43 am
Reviewer: Lady Julie Snape (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Letters: Ron, Hermione and Sirius.

    Action-packed is putting it very lightly my dear. I was just about ready to tear out someone's throat!

    Very good chapter, my dear. You know I love your story.

    I apologize for my short review but it's really late, by my standards, and I'm tired.

    I bid you goodnight.

    Yours,
    Jewels.

    Author's Response: tear out someone's throat? Uh, maybe you'd better take a few deep breaths and calm down? Unless you were planning on tearing out an Unseelie's throat.  letters, i won't say if you're right or not yet.  Have a good night!
Title: In A Dark Dark Wood 02 Aug 2008 8:02 am
Reviewer: Keats (Signed) [Report This]
    Battle was awesome and Harry protecting his brother was great...but of course the highlight was Sev and Sarai, Harry got to see some masters at their best.
    Curious as to how the Raiders got pass the wards and were there to come upon Harry and Draco, was it that the two boys happen to be in the wrong place at the wrong time, or was it a set up to get the boys (Sarai gets an invite asking Sev and the boys along - because once it was sent it would have been rude not to go...) it may be they are targeting Sarai as the best way to hurt someone like her would be to go after those she cares about and the most vulnerable would be the youngsters , or did the boys happen to prevent the raiders going after someone else, the prince perhaps. Anyway it is very intriguing, you have my mind going a hundred miles per hour trying to figure what is going to happen next...I just love it

    Author's Response: Yes, the masters ruled this fight, though the two boys didn't do too badly either considering this was the first time either of them had ever been in combat before, against the Unseelie, that is.  As  for the raiders motivation, the Courts of Light & Dark have always been enemies, and it could be that they were sent to cause mayhem, and the two boys just happened to catch the brunt of it.  The invitation from Balin was legit, shimmerlings can't lie, remember? And he really did want his bodyguard to have a bit of fun, which is why he asked her and her guests to go along. But this is Underhill and you have to expect the unexpected.  rest assured, Balin will make sure nothing like that happens again, it was very embarrassing and horrifying to have a guest attacked that way, especially a young guest. 
Title: In A Dark Dark Wood 02 Aug 2008 6:44 am
Reviewer: justa_me (Signed) [Report This]
    I love this story

    Author's Response: Thanks, hope you enjoy the rest too!
Title: In A Dark Dark Wood 02 Aug 2008 6:39 am
Reviewer: blackmagicwoman (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Holy hellcats! That was one of the best fights I've ever read in a long time. I could feel everything, from draco's injury to severus and sarai's fury. And I loved the aftermath too, with sev and draco and Sarai! Awesome job.

    Author's Response: Thanks!
Title: In A Dark Dark Wood 02 Aug 2008 1:28 am
Reviewer: iluvchocs (Signed) [Report This]
    This chapter was brilliant - you described the fight really well, and I really liked the way you showed that the boys used the skills they'd learnt (especially Harry with the healing spells) in previous chapters. Three letters arrive? I'll be very interested to see who they're from :D

    Author's Response: Thanks and I always try to have my characters use the skills they've learned somewhere down the road in my stories.  it only makes sense, after all, because why bother learning something you won't use? And the letters...are from three different people on three different subjects.  And that's all I'm going to say for now. 
Title: In A Dark Dark Wood 02 Aug 2008 12:33 am
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    sev and sarai to the rescue, im so glad nobody died! brilliant chapter

    Author's Response: Now didn't you guess they would come to save the day? I'm not that cruel as to kill off the children!

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