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Reviews For The Heir to Prince Manor
Author's Response: It's coming up, thanls as always for your review. You're right about the terrible things draco's mother said to him, you'll see the aftermath of that in the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you, I will.
Thanks again Author's Response: You're welcome. I tried to make that part as realisitc as possible. My friend Linda, who is an attorney helped me out a lot. if you're interested, i have a new fic posted that takes place during SS called Arms of a Dark Angel. It has Snape as a secret guardian "angel" to harry during that time.
I really enjoyed this chapter, and the way you used 'legalese' (not that I speak legalese, but it sounded very official to me). I wholeheartedly support that verdict :D Might I ask; how did Vernon die? I can't remember, and I'm too lazy to try and find the chapter that describes what happens. Author's Response: My friend Linda helped me with that part. Vernon was killed by the Death Eaters, they caught him outside of his house and murdered him because they couldn't find where Snape or Harry was hiding. The chapter where that was discussed was the end of Lessons and A Letter when Draco write to Severus. I've started a new story here called Arms of a Dark Angel, in case you haven't seen it, and have just updated it from last night.
Author's Response: I really liked writing that part. It gave me a deep sense of satisfaction. I always felt they got off scott-free in the books. As for whether or not they escape, they can't unless some of their friends try and break them out of prison. But that's not gonna happen.
The lanky blond-haired wizard was knocked flying onto the floor. He sat up, whimpering and clutching his nose, which was streaming blood. Draco rubbed his right hand and growled, "Shut it, Octavian! Now go crawl back into the hole you crawled out of, you dungbeetle carcass. Before I have you arrested for slander. Get!" The trial was not disappointing. I can hardly wait to read the next chapter. :) Author's Response: He did indeed, and Draco got a chance to really stick it to some of his hateful relatives. I pity him with such a family. Good thing he has Harry and Severus now to keep him on the straight and narrow. I should have the next chapter posted sometime soon. Meantime, you could check out my new fic, Arms of a Dark Angel, it's set during SS and features Severus trying to protect Harry during that period without revealing himself to anyone, like Dumbledore or the staff or Harry's friends.
Author's Response: Thanks a bunch. The next chapter is being written.
Author's Response: I'm very glad they're in prison and guess what? They're going to stay there! So draco, like Harry, can live a normal life. Or as normal as possible given their penchant for trouble, LOL!
Author's Response: Yeah, I had to put them in there somewhere. Poor Draco indeed. He'll be getting a lot of hugs from Sev in the next chapter.
Author's Response: Yes that was an important part of this chapter and a turning point in Draco's life that he consciously chose the right path. But it wasn't easy at all, as you'll see in the next chapter. |
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