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Title: Farewell to Prince Manor 02 Jan 2010 7:40 am
Reviewer: snapeswidow (Signed) [Report This]
    another brill. story! i just love it! off to read the Sequel!

    Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Title: Farewell to Prince Manor 06 Dec 2009 8:54 am
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    I really enjoyed this story and can't wait to sink my teeth into the sequel. Great writing!

    Author's Response: Thanks so much and I'm glad you enjoyed it! Hope you like the sequel as well!
Title: Farewell to Prince Manor 10 Aug 2009 1:09 pm
Reviewer: nunu (Anonymous) [Report This]
    omg!!!! THAT WAS FANTASTIC! im sorry i waited until the end to make a comment but honestly that was one of the BEST fanfictions i have ever read! you have a really good style of writting. and the way you have captured the charactors is spendid! btw the rating i give now is for the whole story. keep up the great work!

    Author's Response: Thanks and by the way, I have the sequel posted now so you can read about their continuing adventures at school.  Look for Return to Prince Manor.
Title: Farewell to Prince Manor 20 Jul 2009 10:00 pm
Reviewer: jerseypike (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I loved the story but didn't like the ofc, and the reactions the two boys had with her. If the sequel has much of her in it I will not be reading it.

    Author's Response: Okay, then that's your choice, because both Smidgen and Sarai play signifcant roles in the next story as does another OC, they are what make Prince Manor different from other Severitus stories. Thanks for reading anyhow. 
Title: Farewell to Prince Manor 25 May 2009 9:43 pm
Reviewer: Kittie (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I loved this! I just spent a few hours reading the whole story in one go. I'll definitely be coming back often to check your page for updates.

    Author's Response: Thank you so much! I already have a sequel posted!
Title: Farewell to Prince Manor 25 May 2009 2:23 pm
Reviewer: Ifalna (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Aww! No fair! You can't end this fic here!

    Seriously; this is one of the best Severus/Harry stories I've read: the plotline is original but makes a lot of sense and I love your new characters.

    If I had one criticism it would be that I felt that the relationship between Harry and Severus recovered too quickly: even in the case of a 'lightning bolt' epithiny, I think that, after such a long period of pointed dislike, both characters would take quite a bit longer to lose the habit of snarking at each other.

    A great fic; please, please, please write the sequel; I really want to see whether Hermione becomes lady of Malfoy Manor ;)

    Author's Response:

    Thanks very much!

    I wanted to do something different with this fic and so I added the realm of the fae into it.  I'm happy you liked it!

    And since this was set right after third year, the dislike between the two is not as strong as it was after fifth and sixth year, plus they had a lot of time to adjust to each other in the manor by themselves before Draco showed up.  Weeks went by and the fact remained that Harry couldn't dislike his father any more after seeing one, how he cowed and got even with Vernon and Dudley and two how he took him away from there.  And much of Sev's resentment at that point was based on his thinking that A) he was James Potter's son and B) that Harry lived the life of a pampered spoiled brat.  But once he finds out the truth, that this is HIS child and moreover a child who was treated just as badly as he was by his own father, there is no way that previous resentment would stand, because Severus is a logical man and logically all his reason for "hating" Harry are now gone. Most of the Severitus stories tend to be set AFTER fifth year, with the Pensieve and Sirius's death, and THEN you have the most awful resentment and dislike, but not here.  And frankly, I didn't want to go through a long drawn out period of rebelliousness with Harry when he could clearly see that his father was trying to help him and then go through another one with Draco. After awhile it just gets boring to write quarrel after quarrel. 

    I have already started the sequel called Return to Prince Manor, the first chapter is posted.

Title: Farewell to Prince Manor 15 May 2009 4:06 am
Reviewer: Rebel_Dream (Anonymous) [Report This]
    wow. loved it.

    Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Title: Farewell to Prince Manor 01 Apr 2009 9:43 pm
Reviewer: cckeimig (Signed) [Report This]
    I absolutely loved it! I really do hope you write a sequel!

    Author's Response: I have a sequel planned, but have been slow in writing it because my Muse has been dictating other plt lines to me at the moment, specifically Broken Wings.  So glad you enjoyed it!
Title: Farewell to Prince Manor 15 Feb 2009 5:24 pm
Reviewer: Annette (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wonderfull story please continue it with a sequel. Took me two days to complete it...yes that's right I became hooked and had to read late into the night. Thank you for sharing your creation with us all. Keep up the good work

    Author's Response: Thanks and I am planning a sequel, don't know just yet when I'll post it, I've got a few other stories to complete first.  Hope I didn't keep you up past your bedtime, LOL.
Title: Farewell to Prince Manor 05 Feb 2009 9:21 pm
Reviewer: slashpuppy (Signed) [Report This]
    Excellent story!

    I liked the way Severus Snape developed in your story. I liked Harry and his trials and tribulations. I liked the way Draco joined the others and how they slowly built themselves a family. I like all your OCs: Sarai, Smidgen and the new owls in the family.

    If there was one thing I would have added it would have been Harry and Draco having a quiet word with Hedwig and Stormy and doublechecking that they were happy with where their three chicks (well, Zephyr and Athena anyway) were going to be living.

    Still, it was a magnificent story over all!

    Please, please, please write a sequel.

    Author's Response: Thanks very much. This was a really fun story to write and I look forward to writing a sequel eventually.  That's an interesting idea about the owls, though I think they trust their wizards enough to know that they would find good homes for their children.  Maybe I could do a short piece where all the owl family gets together and discusses their respective masters and mistress.  I loved developing the relationship between Severus and the two boys here, and it'll get better with the sequel.  Perhaps they might even find a way to save Cedric this time around.  And shock the scales off old Voldy too!  If you liked this one, you could read Arms of a Dark Angel, which is a retake on the Sorcerer's Stone and Harry and Snape as secret guardian and faster son.

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