Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Chapter 6 10 Apr 2009 3:09 am
Reviewer: cckeimig (Signed) [Report This]
    This was revised??? I honestly finished slogging through this chapter because I like your story and am tracking it, but the spelling/word choice errors and the word order/grammar errors were so distracting I got no enjoyment out of this chapter, I'm afraid to say.
Title: Chapter 6 09 Apr 2009 7:57 am
Reviewer: snakechild (Signed) [Report This]
    that... was... GREAT
    i want to read more
    update soon
    PLEASE
Title: Chapter 6 08 Apr 2009 10:31 pm
Reviewer: Corentenig (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Awesome as always!
    But you made a little mistake the name of Durmstrang headmaster isn't "Karkoloff" but "Karkaroff" and the books said he is a deatheater.

    Author's Response: A death eater that gave names in exchange for freedom and when Voldemort returned, went into hiding because he wasn't exactly the most popular person amoung the Death Eaters. The moment he started giving names was the moment he stoped being a Death Eater.
Title: Chapter 6 08 Apr 2009 7:54 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    I like how you reserached the potion. Oh so Harry won't be playing Quidditch at all in your story?

    I'm wondering if Luicius will be mad at Malfoy, or at Snape for Draco's misbehaviour. He's liable to blame Snape for it all. Afterall, I can't see Lucius objecting to Draco calling anyone Mudblood.

    Author's Response: Lucius strikes me as a person who would only use the word in private. A well known person like him with the ear of the Ministry wouldn't exactly use that kind of word in public when a large portion of the population would take great offence to it. Also, he pleaded imperious curse. Him using that world would make people question him even more.

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