Potions and Snitches
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Title: Chapter 9 29 Apr 2009 2:22 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow interesting. The painting knows that Harry has a peice of Voldie inside him. Yikes. How come Snape doesn't know about this potion?

    I love how Snape is hanging events. Nice work.

    I think that there is somewhere on here where you can find a beta. Up at the top I believe. Go on Shoutbox and ask, Jan will help you.

    Author's Response: He knows about the potion, just he can't find the reciepe for it.
Title: Chapter 9 29 Apr 2009 12:59 am
Reviewer: hawkswench (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I always did wonder why JK never had Harry talking to any snakes in the paintings, I wonder if there was a picture of Salazar.
    Other than proof reading, I am not sure what a beta does, but I do have the time.
Title: Chapter 8 19 Apr 2009 11:36 am
Reviewer: mithrilandtj (Signed) [Report This]
    Fantastic chapter! I'm SO glad that Severus now has someone to confide in & get help from. Minerva will be a great help!

    Author's Response:

    Yep. Espessaly if he ever has to meet with Dumbledore.

Title: Chapter 8 18 Apr 2009 7:01 pm
Reviewer: Elfwyn (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I am glad Sev finally has a co-conspirator and help. Much better than oblivating her.

    Author's Response: There's 2 more people he is going to tell. McGonagall will be most helpfull in helping Severus with matters relating to the school.
Title: Chapter 8 18 Apr 2009 7:14 am
Reviewer: FawkesSong (Signed) [Report This]
    Nice job! You pretty much had to summarize the entire 7th book! It is a very good summary, too.

    Author's Response: Thanks. I'm going to have to do something similar in another story I'm writting (its not going to be posted here due to lack of Harry/Snape interation) though it would be Dumbledore saying those things (he finds himself in a situation that he has no choice but to tell some people...). Hopefully I'll do a good job there as well when I get to it...
Title: Chapter 8 18 Apr 2009 2:29 am
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter!

    Good, Now Sev has a "partner in crime" as it were. I can't see Minerva doing anything less than her best to help him help Harry.

    Looking forward to your next update.
    V

    Author's Response: Between him and Minerva, Hogwarts is covered.
Title: Chapter 8 18 Apr 2009 2:29 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Glad you've updated. I'm really surprised that Snape was so candid with McGonagall about Dumbledore's relationship with Grindewald!

    I'm looking forward to the next chapter. You are full of surprises!

    Author's Response:

    I consider myself predictably unpredictable. :P

    Anyways, the Grindelwald stuff is going to come up again.

Title: Chapter 7 11 Apr 2009 4:30 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Ooh, too funny, and of course evil, making Ron all green!

    I hope that Snape lets Harry join the team.

    I'm really enjoying this story, well done.
Title: Chapter 6 10 Apr 2009 3:09 am
Reviewer: cckeimig (Signed) [Report This]
    This was revised??? I honestly finished slogging through this chapter because I like your story and am tracking it, but the spelling/word choice errors and the word order/grammar errors were so distracting I got no enjoyment out of this chapter, I'm afraid to say.
Title: Chapter 6 09 Apr 2009 7:57 am
Reviewer: snakechild (Signed) [Report This]
    that... was... GREAT
    i want to read more
    update soon
    PLEASE

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