Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Chapter 6 08 Apr 2009 10:31 pm
Reviewer: Corentenig (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Awesome as always!
    But you made a little mistake the name of Durmstrang headmaster isn't "Karkoloff" but "Karkaroff" and the books said he is a deatheater.

    Author's Response: A death eater that gave names in exchange for freedom and when Voldemort returned, went into hiding because he wasn't exactly the most popular person amoung the Death Eaters. The moment he started giving names was the moment he stoped being a Death Eater.
Title: Chapter 6 08 Apr 2009 7:54 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    I like how you reserached the potion. Oh so Harry won't be playing Quidditch at all in your story?

    I'm wondering if Luicius will be mad at Malfoy, or at Snape for Draco's misbehaviour. He's liable to blame Snape for it all. Afterall, I can't see Lucius objecting to Draco calling anyone Mudblood.

    Author's Response: Lucius strikes me as a person who would only use the word in private. A well known person like him with the ear of the Ministry wouldn't exactly use that kind of word in public when a large portion of the population would take great offence to it. Also, he pleaded imperious curse. Him using that world would make people question him even more.
Title: Chapter 5 07 Apr 2009 5:16 am
Reviewer: snakechild (Signed) [Report This]
    nooooooooooooooo i want more i like this please write more i begg you

    Author's Response: I already have all the chapters up to 13 written. Just need to edit them before I start writing new stuff for this story.
Title: Chapter 5 06 Apr 2009 10:16 pm
Reviewer: NaiveGhost (Signed) [Report This]
    Thanks for the update. I like the idea of Snape recognizing what he did wrong and trying to change things for the better. I hope the Sirius situation is corrected before 3rd year.

    Author's Response: The Sirius situation will be corrected by the end of the 1st year if you read the first version of the story I posted.
Title: Chapter 5 06 Apr 2009 3:05 am
Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed) [Report This]
    Good to see this back. Ron is acting more mature - perhaps having to protect someone brings out the best in him.

    Author's Response: That, and his fears about members of his family thinking he'll end up like Malfoy is putting pressure on him to be nice to Hermione.
Title: Chapter 4 05 Apr 2009 3:45 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    I like how Snape is trying to alter events, and I'm pleased that Harry got sorted into Slyterhin, so perhaps Snape can get to know him better this time. There are a lot of events to change to make things better between the two of them. It looks as though Snape is determined to do just that though.
Title: Chapter 3 04 Apr 2009 3:14 am
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) [Report This]
    HE he HE he HE he He HEEEEE. Snort--Ron a snake-snort. I can see Hermionie and Harry, but Ron? While he is a wonderful tactician when it comes to Chess-Sneaky he "aint".

    Oh dear--what next. And just what happened on the train to make Hermionie fight with the hat to be in Slytherin? She wanted to be with Harry that bad?

    MOre soon please!
    V.

    Author's Response: Snape confonded the sorting hat.
Title: Chapter 3 03 Apr 2009 7:20 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    That was great!!! I love Ron's reaction too.

    I love the premise of this story, and I'm really anxious to read more. I'm excited about what you've done so far with it , and I'm looking forward to seeing how you change the events .

    Please update soon.

    p.s. Fred and George were great as well! Too too funny! ;)
Title: Chapter 3 03 Apr 2009 8:20 am
Reviewer: hawkswench (Anonymous) [Report This]
    good job on Ron's sorting, but I am curious on how Draco would have reacted.

    Author's Response: You'll find out in the next chapter though if you can't wait, you can always read the story on my website. I have everything up to chapter 13 done and posted there but they haven't been corrected yet.
Title: Chapter 2 03 Apr 2009 5:21 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Hi, not sure if I've read your story before, because I've not belonged to the sight for all that long, but I like what I've read so far!

    Nice work, and I'm interested to see which House Harry ends up in. I'll read it either way. It's your story be as creative as you ike.

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