| Title: Chapter 2
| 26 May 2008 7:53 pm
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| Reviewer: SnapesYukuai (Anonymous)
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Oh THAT was cute!!! Your story is absolutely INGENIOUS!! And this chap was sooo funny. ^____^ Please, hurry with updating. Yours truly, Melfis.
| Title: Chapter 2
| 26 May 2008 9:50 am
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| Reviewer: Elfwyn (Anonymous)
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Cute. I liked it as it contained a smart, thinking Harry, instead of that emo git in cannon.
You have done a good job combining angst and humor in these first two chapters. I especially enjoyed Harry's making fun of his fame with the basilisck fang and Minerva's interaction with Severus in this chapter. I'm looking forward to the rest of the story.
| Title: Chapter 2
| 22 May 2008 9:23 pm
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| Reviewer: sarah (Anonymous)
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love it!!! great, love that harry seems to have a lot more insight than usual
Aww, that was great! loved the byplay between Sev and Minerva and the notes were so funny! Can't wait to see what else happens!
That had me laughing at the end - "Slithering with Slytherin." Yes, Severus - go get the toad
yay like your story so far i was holding my nose while i read it! hehe
I love this story so far. I especially love Harry's 'advertisement' for the basilik fang.^-^ Can't wait for more, thanks for the story.
Excellent story!! Much smarter Harry. It will be interesting to see how you go on with this.
Thanks for writing. Please keep it up.
Cool story! Can't wait to see where you take it.
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