SO--just when ARE you going to update this wonderful beginning, eh?
When, oh when, oh, WHEN???!!!
(Please hurry!)
| Title: Chapter 2
| 26 May 2008 7:53 pm
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| Reviewer: SnapesYukuai (Anonymous)
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Oh THAT was cute!!! Your story is absolutely INGENIOUS!! And this chap was sooo funny. ^____^ Please, hurry with updating. Yours truly, Melfis.
| Title: Chapter 2
| 26 May 2008 9:50 am
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| Reviewer: Elfwyn (Anonymous)
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Cute. I liked it as it contained a smart, thinking Harry, instead of that emo git in cannon.
You have done a good job combining angst and humor in these first two chapters. I especially enjoyed Harry's making fun of his fame with the basilisck fang and Minerva's interaction with Severus in this chapter. I'm looking forward to the rest of the story.
| Title: Chapter 2
| 22 May 2008 9:23 pm
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| Reviewer: sarah (Anonymous)
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love it!!! great, love that harry seems to have a lot more insight than usual
Aww, that was great! loved the byplay between Sev and Minerva and the notes were so funny! Can't wait to see what else happens!
I like this alot! i always felt that excuse that they were only fifteen was so lame in the books. I wanted to throw up! I'm glad you made Harry confront Sirius and show him how wrong he was. Hope he learned something.
That had me laughing at the end - "Slithering with Slytherin." Yes, Severus - go get the toad
yay like your story so far i was holding my nose while i read it! hehe
Very interesting looking forward to updates
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