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Reviews For Seraphim and Serpents
Your happy reader, Melfis.
I loved seeing Severus' thoughts on the students and his responsibilities towards them, the way he welcomed the first years and put them at ease, and how he established that they must stick together and that blood status has no place in their House. Great chapter, and I can't wait for him and Harry to have these little meetings with the twins! Author's Response: *Squeels and dances around in a circle* I'm SO glad you like it! I was afraid you wouldn't. Thanks so much, you're awesome! And the meeting with the twins is coming up soon, promise. Thanks so much! :) -Elise
Author's Response: Thanks. I'll probably do a rewrite when I'm finished, so I'll take into consideration what you said. I'm glad you think my story is good, that's really great to hear. Hopefully you'll like the next chapter better. (So far there will be a Potions lesson and a chat with Remus, but I'll probably write more stuff in, like the first appearance of Draco.) :) Well, thanks for the review! -Elise
Author's Response: Hey, thanks. I understand your points, and I'll think about them. The hat didn't put Harry in Slytherin because the child was desperate, and a desperate, emotional child can carry a lot of magical power (atleast in my universe.) And Severus has an agreement with the prefects to tell the children that he did not mean what he said. Now, obviously, there will probably be some complications, and those will be written in. And I'd appreciate it if you didn't curse in your reviews, if you review this anymore, thanks. And I know I need a beta, I'll think about trying to find one. Well, thanks. -Elise
However i can see what your doing in setting up and establishing the character so you have a particular 'Snape' interacting with Harry later. I'm always very wary of the whole 'exchange student from America' idea as it changes the whole pathos of the school, but your doing well so far. :) Working like a plot bunny ten to the dozen, lol. Keep up the good work. Author's Response: Thanks for the review, Cecilia. I'm glad you think I'm doing well on the 'student exchange' thing. :) And, yeah, I am trying to get a particular Snape going her. I'm trying not to fall into the trap of 'Oh, he's an evil snarky git, but he finds out he has a son and then he's all nice!' People don't change their spots overnight, so I'm trying to show that he isn't always evil. *ducks flying jars of frog tongues thrown at her by Sevvy-poo* lol. Thanks so much for the review, Cecilia. You're the greatest! -Elise
I could see Severus treating his "snakes" like this. With the house prejudice against Slytherin, someone has to take care of them. Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you think my portrayal of Sev is right. I was a little worried about it, but everyone seems to like it. And yes, mischief will abound! lol. I'm glad you like the twins, they're fun to write. Thanks so much for your review! -Elise
Author's Response: Oh, wow, thank you so much! I'm so glad that I got Severus right. I always thought that the Slytherins were a very close bunch. Thanks so much for your awesome review, I am grinning so much right now! I'm so relieved that someone liked my portrayal of Sev. Thanks SO much, you're amazing! -Elise
Author's Response: Hmm, good guess....you'll just have to wait and see! :) (I'm cruel, aren't I?) I'm glad you're intrigued, and the next chapter (maybe the next 3 or 4 chapters) should be up over the weekend. Thanks for the review! :) -Elise |
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