Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: A Conversation 05 Jul 2008 4:02 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    It was a great chapter. I liked the way Sev needs reassurance from his friend and the way his students ask him for advice, especially on sex. it's hysterical! Oh and one more thing--never apologize for putting certain things in certain chapters--it's YOUR story and you should write it the way YOU want to, in the way that seems best to you. That's the advice I used to give to my creative writing students when I taught.
Title: A Conversation 19 Jun 2008 4:03 am
Reviewer: SnapesYukuai (Anonymous) [Report This]
    For a "filler" chap as you call it, it was absolutely brilliant. So, don't tell your readers that little detail and they won't notice a thing. ^^ It was great.
    Your Melfis.
Title: A Conversation 06 Jun 2008 5:17 am
Reviewer: Elfwyn (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Freedom of Speech. Don't sensor mine and I won't sensor yours.
Title: A Conversation 30 May 2008 7:00 pm
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    I thought it was a great chapter! It's very interesting to see Severus and Remus getting along. I hope you'll explain more about their relationship later in the story. It shows a lot of trust on Remus' part that he didn't just dismiss Severus' claims about seeing Lily and being Harry's father...I really liked that.

    Can't wait to see Potions class now!

    Author's Response:

    Oh, I'm glad you like Sev and Remy. They're fun to write. :)

    And, yes, explanations abound in later chapters. Promise.

    Err...still having slight trouble writing potions class. Grr. But it will be up soon. Trust me.

    Well, thanks so much for your awesome reviews! You're the best.

    Kisses and Coffee, Kristeh.

    -Elise

Title: A Conversation 28 May 2008 6:58 am
Reviewer: Midnight Oil (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Interesting fic so far. Keep it up!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks!

    -Elise

Title: A Conversation 28 May 2008 5:46 am
Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed) [Report This]
    This is enjoyable. I wish I could picture Severus' face when asked him about French kissing (at twelve years old!!! - wow, those English boys mature early.)

    How did Remus and Severus become friends?

    Author's Response:

    Hehe, glad you liked that line. I loved writing that part. And, honey, that's not just english boys, that's everywhere. I live in America, and I have an eleven year old cousin who's had boyfriends since she was in the first-grade (about ten in all, because she kept breaking up with them and getting back together again, lol.)

    It's sad, really, that children grow up so fast.

    (But I'll have a lot of fun writing the Slytherin boys. I plan on having a lot of scenes like that one. hehe. *she grins evilly at Severus, who shudders*. lol.)

    And you'll find out about Remy and Sev's friendship soon, I promise.

    Well, thanks so much for the review! You're awesome. :)

    -Elise


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