Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Bloody Potions... 05 Jul 2008 4:07 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Now that was a clever way to get blood from harry. Will we learn why Harry is so afraid of Severus in another chapter? This is getting very intriguing.

    Oh by the way, I've started a new fic called where shadows go and updated the heir to prince manor too!
Title: Bloody Potions... 19 Jun 2008 3:53 pm
Reviewer: SnapesYukuai (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I'm thrilled to know what's behind the twins' actions. Oh, and Sev can be so gently and charming, if he wants to be. ^^ I long for more, so PLEASE update quickly.
    Yours truly, Melfis.
Title: Bloody Potions... 10 Jun 2008 8:02 pm
Reviewer: momothehomeskilletbuiscuit (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I liked it it showed an unfamiliar side of snape and i hope to see it come back!! Make sure u do a point of view from hedwig!!
    peace outt,
    your sis

    Author's Response: aaw, thanksies, Mo! I'm glad you like. And I'll def. think about Hedwig's POV, promise. Love ya!
    -Elise
Title: Bloody Potions... 06 Jun 2008 5:22 am
Reviewer: Elfwyn (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Who are these strange girls? Good chapter but way too short.
Title: Bloody Potions... 02 Jun 2008 7:09 pm
Reviewer: sunsethill (Signed) [Report This]
    Hmm. I'm wondering why Harry would be afraid of Snape--and your OC is definitely creepy. Don't know if that's what you intended but her sneaky whispering is creeping me out.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks so much for the review! Yeah, Arynn's meant to be slightly creepy-both of them are. For now. I'm sorta (ok, this sounds terrible, but) glad you're creeped out. It's a good thing! lol.

    And you'll find out Harry's fear of Snape soon. Next chapter. It's pretty straightforward, no hidden meaning or anything though.

    Well, thanks so much for the review!

    -Elise

Title: Bloody Potions... 02 Jun 2008 7:33 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Ooh, Severus got some of Harry's blood for that paternity potion. Very good, now it'll be real proof.

    I felt so badly for Harry when he was thinking how he was frightened of Severus, and I do hope Severus will make things up to Harry for the awful way he's treated him until now. I did love how he cared for Harry's cut, though...that was sweet (dare I say 'sweet' or will Severus come after me?) of him.

    Great chapter! I loved it!

    Author's Response:

    Ooh, yay! I'm glad you noticed about the blood.

    And yes, Sev will try his best to make it up to Harry.

    And you may say sweet Kristeh. I'll keep Snape away. *throws Sev into a closet so he won't come after Kristeh* lol. I'm glad you liked the part about the cut. I liked writing it.

    Well, thanks so much for your awesome review!

    -Elise

Title: Bloody Potions... 02 Jun 2008 4:19 am
Reviewer: writeurlife (Signed) [Report This]
    this is getting really good, though I wish your chapters were longer (actually, normally i'd say i wish you would update faster, but that doesn't seem fair when i know you update your story more than i update mine, plus more than most people update. i just REALLY want to know what happens)

    Author's Response:

    Hehe. Thanks, I'm so glad you like it! And about longer chapters...well,I've a bad case of writer's block. (Not plot-block mind you. I know what's going to happen, I just can't seem to get the thoughts to sound right on paper.) So, I'm having a hard time trying to get at least 1300 words for a chapter. So, for right now, shorter chapters will be the best I can do. But I'm working on it. Hopefully, I can get them longer. I'll try!

    You'll find out what happens soon, I promise! Next chapter should be up by the end of the week! :)

    Thanks for your great review!

    -Elise

Title: Bloody Potions... 02 Jun 2008 12:47 am
Reviewer: JolisGSD (Signed) [Report This]
    Very interesting story.

    I do have a problem with your depiction of Snape as a lover of children, since I find it hard to believe that any person who "loved" children and had the relationship with many of them that you portrayed Snape as having with his Slytherins, could knowingly be as emotionally abusive to Harry as he was in canon books 1 & 2.

    However, you know that your Snape is OOC, so . . . . I thought it was interesting that he apparently is also some kind of friends with Lupus.

    Your writing is good and I appreciate the humor.

    I'll be interested to see the twists and turns this story might take.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks! I'm glad you find my story interesting.


    I understand your point, and it's a very good one. Rest assured, the reasons (Snapey always has his reasons!) for the way he acted toward Harry in years 1 & 2 will be covered in the story, I promise.


    I'm glad you think I write well, and I'm glad you like my humor. :)

    If you're looking forward to twists, you'll be very happy to know that there will defenitly be twists. Oh, boy, will there be twists! :)

    Well, thanks for your review!

    -Elise

     


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