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Reviews For Seraphim and Serpents
Oh by the way, I've started a new fic called where shadows go and updated the heir to prince manor too!
Yours truly, Melfis.
peace outt, your sis Author's Response: aaw, thanksies, Mo! I'm glad you like. And I'll def. think about Hedwig's POV, promise. Love ya! -Elise
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! Yeah, Arynn's meant to be slightly creepy-both of them are. For now. I'm sorta (ok, this sounds terrible, but) glad you're creeped out. It's a good thing! lol. And you'll find out Harry's fear of Snape soon. Next chapter. It's pretty straightforward, no hidden meaning or anything though. Well, thanks so much for the review! -Elise
I felt so badly for Harry when he was thinking how he was frightened of Severus, and I do hope Severus will make things up to Harry for the awful way he's treated him until now. I did love how he cared for Harry's cut, though...that was sweet (dare I say 'sweet' or will Severus come after me?) of him. Great chapter! I loved it! Author's Response: Ooh, yay! I'm glad you noticed about the blood. And yes, Sev will try his best to make it up to Harry. And you may say sweet Kristeh. I'll keep Snape away. *throws Sev into a closet so he won't come after Kristeh* lol. I'm glad you liked the part about the cut. I liked writing it. Well, thanks so much for your awesome review! -Elise
Author's Response: Hehe. Thanks, I'm so glad you like it! And about longer chapters...well,I've a bad case of writer's block. (Not plot-block mind you. I know what's going to happen, I just can't seem to get the thoughts to sound right on paper.) So, I'm having a hard time trying to get at least 1300 words for a chapter. So, for right now, shorter chapters will be the best I can do. But I'm working on it. Hopefully, I can get them longer. I'll try! You'll find out what happens soon, I promise! Next chapter should be up by the end of the week! :) Thanks for your great review! -Elise
I do have a problem with your depiction of Snape as a lover of children, since I find it hard to believe that any person who "loved" children and had the relationship with many of them that you portrayed Snape as having with his Slytherins, could knowingly be as emotionally abusive to Harry as he was in canon books 1 & 2. However, you know that your Snape is OOC, so . . . . I thought it was interesting that he apparently is also some kind of friends with Lupus. Your writing is good and I appreciate the humor. I'll be interested to see the twists and turns this story might take. Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you find my story interesting.
If you're looking forward to twists, you'll be very happy to know that there will defenitly be twists. Oh, boy, will there be twists! :) Well, thanks for your review! -Elise
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