Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Decisions 20 Dec 2008 12:24 am
Reviewer: gin (Anonymous) [Report This]
    i love it.remus is right.severus is wonderful father.i hope snape find about dursley.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks so much! Yes, Snape will find out about the Dursleys, don't worry!

Title: Discoveries and Memories 19 Dec 2008 3:30 pm
Reviewer: gin (Anonymous) [Report This]
    most excited part and you cut. you are very bad you know:) i cant wait next chapter.please update soon.im worried harry' reactions.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you. Yes, I know that was very bad of me...sorry!

    (Harry: She's not sorry at all.)

    (Me: Shush, you!)

    Thanks again! :)

    -Elise

Title: Discoveries and Memories 19 Dec 2008 1:15 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    I am so glad you're back and this chapter was amazing, but I'm confused..the potions was supposed to turn gold, not black if Harry was Snape's son, wasn't it. You mentioned that they were staring at the "ebony" liquid in the cauldron.

    Did I misunderstand? Anyway, it's not important, what's important is that you are back! Please don't wait as long to update! I really want to see where Harry and Sev's relationship goes and what those mysterious twins have to do with it!

    Author's Response:

    Yeah, that was a mistype, I'm sorry! I've changed it to gold, and everything is as it should be!

    (Harry: that's what you get for writing at 1:00 in the morning)

    (Me: Well, atleast I'm giving you a father! Show some bloody gratitude, why don't you?)

    (Sev: Merlin preserve my sanity)

     lol. Oh, and I'm so glad you liked it! Thanks so much for all your sweet words, they really made my day. :) And no, I won't wait as long, I promise! :)

    Love ya,

    -Elise

Title: Discoveries and Memories 19 Dec 2008 1:11 pm
Reviewer: Imbrium (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I'm a little confused. You wrote that if Snape was Harry's father the potion would turn gold, if not then black, but later both Lupin and Snape were looking at the ebony liquid in the cauldron. Was that just a little mistake?

    Author's Response: Whoops. Yep, that was a mistake, and I'll change it asap. Thanks for pointing it out!
Title: Discoveries and Memories 19 Dec 2008 10:49 am
Reviewer: fanficaholic (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great story! Can't wait for more!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks! :)

    -Elise

Title: Bloody Potions... 05 Jul 2008 4:07 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Now that was a clever way to get blood from harry. Will we learn why Harry is so afraid of Severus in another chapter? This is getting very intriguing.

    Oh by the way, I've started a new fic called where shadows go and updated the heir to prince manor too!
Title: A Conversation 05 Jul 2008 4:02 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    It was a great chapter. I liked the way Sev needs reassurance from his friend and the way his students ask him for advice, especially on sex. it's hysterical! Oh and one more thing--never apologize for putting certain things in certain chapters--it's YOUR story and you should write it the way YOU want to, in the way that seems best to you. That's the advice I used to give to my creative writing students when I taught.
Title: In the Lair of the Snakes... 05 Jul 2008 3:56 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    I Like him this way, he should be more personable and also it makes sense that he would take the abused children, for he would know best how to deal with them. But what is going on with the twins? Are they having some kind of channeling experience ?
Title: Interesting Developments 05 Jul 2008 3:46 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Mr. Snape?? Now what could she mean by that? Loved fred and George too!
Title: New Faces 05 Jul 2008 3:43 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    I have to laugh at Ron & Hermione, sometimes they crack me up! Sev, a pedophile, oh my good God! And I thought it was sweet, how he held Harry. And I like the way you had the twins sorted into two different Houses, it's different.

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