Potions and Snitches
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Title: Bloody Potions... 06 Jun 2008 5:22 am
Reviewer: Elfwyn (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Who are these strange girls? Good chapter but way too short.
Title: A Conversation 06 Jun 2008 5:17 am
Reviewer: Elfwyn (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Freedom of Speech. Don't sensor mine and I won't sensor yours.
Title: Bloody Potions... 02 Jun 2008 7:09 pm
Reviewer: sunsethill (Signed) [Report This]
    Hmm. I'm wondering why Harry would be afraid of Snape--and your OC is definitely creepy. Don't know if that's what you intended but her sneaky whispering is creeping me out.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks so much for the review! Yeah, Arynn's meant to be slightly creepy-both of them are. For now. I'm sorta (ok, this sounds terrible, but) glad you're creeped out. It's a good thing! lol.

    And you'll find out Harry's fear of Snape soon. Next chapter. It's pretty straightforward, no hidden meaning or anything though.

    Well, thanks so much for the review!

    -Elise

Title: Bloody Potions... 02 Jun 2008 7:33 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Ooh, Severus got some of Harry's blood for that paternity potion. Very good, now it'll be real proof.

    I felt so badly for Harry when he was thinking how he was frightened of Severus, and I do hope Severus will make things up to Harry for the awful way he's treated him until now. I did love how he cared for Harry's cut, though...that was sweet (dare I say 'sweet' or will Severus come after me?) of him.

    Great chapter! I loved it!

    Author's Response:

    Ooh, yay! I'm glad you noticed about the blood.

    And yes, Sev will try his best to make it up to Harry.

    And you may say sweet Kristeh. I'll keep Snape away. *throws Sev into a closet so he won't come after Kristeh* lol. I'm glad you liked the part about the cut. I liked writing it.

    Well, thanks so much for your awesome review!

    -Elise

Title: Bloody Potions... 02 Jun 2008 4:19 am
Reviewer: writeurlife (Signed) [Report This]
    this is getting really good, though I wish your chapters were longer (actually, normally i'd say i wish you would update faster, but that doesn't seem fair when i know you update your story more than i update mine, plus more than most people update. i just REALLY want to know what happens)

    Author's Response:

    Hehe. Thanks, I'm so glad you like it! And about longer chapters...well,I've a bad case of writer's block. (Not plot-block mind you. I know what's going to happen, I just can't seem to get the thoughts to sound right on paper.) So, I'm having a hard time trying to get at least 1300 words for a chapter. So, for right now, shorter chapters will be the best I can do. But I'm working on it. Hopefully, I can get them longer. I'll try!

    You'll find out what happens soon, I promise! Next chapter should be up by the end of the week! :)

    Thanks for your great review!

    -Elise

Title: Bloody Potions... 02 Jun 2008 12:47 am
Reviewer: JolisGSD (Signed) [Report This]
    Very interesting story.

    I do have a problem with your depiction of Snape as a lover of children, since I find it hard to believe that any person who "loved" children and had the relationship with many of them that you portrayed Snape as having with his Slytherins, could knowingly be as emotionally abusive to Harry as he was in canon books 1 & 2.

    However, you know that your Snape is OOC, so . . . . I thought it was interesting that he apparently is also some kind of friends with Lupus.

    Your writing is good and I appreciate the humor.

    I'll be interested to see the twists and turns this story might take.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks! I'm glad you find my story interesting.


    I understand your point, and it's a very good one. Rest assured, the reasons (Snapey always has his reasons!) for the way he acted toward Harry in years 1 & 2 will be covered in the story, I promise.


    I'm glad you think I write well, and I'm glad you like my humor. :)

    If you're looking forward to twists, you'll be very happy to know that there will defenitly be twists. Oh, boy, will there be twists! :)

    Well, thanks for your review!

    -Elise

     

Title: A Conversation 30 May 2008 7:00 pm
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    I thought it was a great chapter! It's very interesting to see Severus and Remus getting along. I hope you'll explain more about their relationship later in the story. It shows a lot of trust on Remus' part that he didn't just dismiss Severus' claims about seeing Lily and being Harry's father...I really liked that.

    Can't wait to see Potions class now!

    Author's Response:

    Oh, I'm glad you like Sev and Remy. They're fun to write. :)

    And, yes, explanations abound in later chapters. Promise.

    Err...still having slight trouble writing potions class. Grr. But it will be up soon. Trust me.

    Well, thanks so much for your awesome reviews! You're the best.

    Kisses and Coffee, Kristeh.

    -Elise

Title: In the Lair of the Snakes... 30 May 2008 6:54 pm
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    I loved this chapter, and you have nothing to apologise for. It's important to establish character and scenes like, with the detailed interactions, make everything seem more real.

    I loved seeing Severus' thoughts on the students and his responsibilities towards them, the way he welcomed the first years and put them at ease, and how he established that they must stick together and that blood status has no place in their House.

    Great chapter, and I can't wait for him and Harry to have these little meetings with the twins!

    Author's Response:

    *Squeels and dances around in a circle*

    I'm SO glad you like it! I was afraid you wouldn't. Thanks so much, you're awesome!

    And the meeting with the twins is coming up soon, promise.

    Thanks so much! :)

    -Elise

Title: Interesting Developments 30 May 2008 12:02 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, very interesting development here! I had a feeling there was more to those twins than met the eye. (the new ones, lol...we all know Fred and George have unplummeted depths!).

    Once again, I'm so impressed at just how real the kids seem. I loved the Trio running ahead to get the best spots in the common room, and the Weasley twins bursting in and counting down til the rest of the House came in.

    The way Fred reached out to Harry and reassured him of his place in the Weasley family was just wonderful, too. Harry is very lucky to have such fantastic friends.

    Author's Response:

    Oh, thank you! You always seem to notice the exact points that I want people to notice. Thanks, I have fun writing the trio and the twins. (Both sets, lol.)

    I was glad you liked Fred. I was a little uncertain at first, but you've calmed all my fears about writing him like that. Thanks!

    Well, thanks so much for the review!

    -Elise

Title: New Faces 29 May 2008 11:21 pm
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    I really enjoyed this chapter, too! Of course Ron and Hermione would be staggered by the way Severus held Harry...I wonder how they'll take it when the truth comes out?

    All the kids seem so believable, and their interactions are fun to read. Looking forward to more!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks! I'm glad the characters are believable. That's really g,reat to hear. Well, all the kids will know the truth soon, and well....I can't tell you their reactions. But they'll be fun to write, and hopefully fun to read.

     Thanks so much for the great review. You're awesome.

    -Elise


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