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Reviews For Seraphim and Serpents
I loved how Harry fell asleep in Severus' arms...wonder what he'll think when he wakes up! Author's Response: Thanks so much Kristeh! I'm glad my transistions were smooth, i was hoping they would be. I'm glad you like Remy and Sev's relationship. I love writing it. Thanks so much for your review! You're so sweet. -Elise
Author's Response: Thanks! You're so sweet! I hope you like the rest of it! -Elise
-Moe the home skillet bisuit aka Elise's sister. Author's Response: Thanks, sis. :) (I think you meant to write home skillet biscuit, right? lol.) Well, thanks so much, you're the greatest. Love ya! -Elise :)
Author's Response: Thanks! -Elise
How did Remus and Severus become friends? Author's Response: Hehe, glad you liked that line. I loved writing that part. And, honey, that's not just english boys, that's everywhere. I live in America, and I have an eleven year old cousin who's had boyfriends since she was in the first-grade (about ten in all, because she kept breaking up with them and getting back together again, lol.) It's sad, really, that children grow up so fast. (But I'll have a lot of fun writing the Slytherin boys. I plan on having a lot of scenes like that one. hehe. *she grins evilly at Severus, who shudders*. lol.) And you'll find out about Remy and Sev's friendship soon, I promise. -Elise
Author's Response: Thanks. I'll probably do a rewrite when I'm finished, so I'll take into consideration what you said. I'm glad you think my story is good, that's really great to hear. Hopefully you'll like the next chapter better. (So far there will be a Potions lesson and a chat with Remus, but I'll probably write more stuff in, like the first appearance of Draco.) :) Well, thanks for the review! -Elise
Author's Response: Hey, thanks. I understand your points, and I'll think about them. The hat didn't put Harry in Slytherin because the child was desperate, and a desperate, emotional child can carry a lot of magical power (atleast in my universe.) And Severus has an agreement with the prefects to tell the children that he did not mean what he said. Now, obviously, there will probably be some complications, and those will be written in. And I'd appreciate it if you didn't curse in your reviews, if you review this anymore, thanks. And I know I need a beta, I'll think about trying to find one. Well, thanks. -Elise
However i can see what your doing in setting up and establishing the character so you have a particular 'Snape' interacting with Harry later. I'm always very wary of the whole 'exchange student from America' idea as it changes the whole pathos of the school, but your doing well so far. :) Working like a plot bunny ten to the dozen, lol. Keep up the good work. Author's Response: Thanks for the review, Cecilia. I'm glad you think I'm doing well on the 'student exchange' thing. :) And, yeah, I am trying to get a particular Snape going her. I'm trying not to fall into the trap of 'Oh, he's an evil snarky git, but he finds out he has a son and then he's all nice!' People don't change their spots overnight, so I'm trying to show that he isn't always evil. *ducks flying jars of frog tongues thrown at her by Sevvy-poo* lol. Thanks so much for the review, Cecilia. You're the greatest! -Elise
I could see Severus treating his "snakes" like this. With the house prejudice against Slytherin, someone has to take care of them. Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you think my portrayal of Sev is right. I was a little worried about it, but everyone seems to like it. And yes, mischief will abound! lol. I'm glad you like the twins, they're fun to write. Thanks so much for your review! -Elise
Author's Response: Oh, wow, thank you so much! I'm so glad that I got Severus right. I always thought that the Slytherins were a very close bunch. Thanks so much for your awesome review, I am grinning so much right now! I'm so relieved that someone liked my portrayal of Sev. Thanks SO much, you're amazing! -Elise |
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