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Title: In the Lair of the Snakes... 24 May 2008 6:47 am
Reviewer: Keats (Anonymous) [Report This]
    They’re guardian angels sent to get father and son together or they’re from the future? Hmm you have me intrigued... looking forward to next chapter

    Author's Response:

    Hmm, good guess....you'll just have to wait and see! :) (I'm cruel, aren't I?)

    I'm glad you're intrigued, and the next chapter (maybe the next 3 or 4 chapters) should be up over the weekend.

    Thanks for the review! :)

    -Elise

Title: Interesting Developments 24 May 2008 3:24 am
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) [Report This]
    Sweeeeet Carolinee, doo doo doooo! Righhhht, well anyway that was a b-e-a-utiful chapter! All the students seemed kind of hyper, lol. Do they serve Red Bull at Hogwarts? The memory of Fred calling Harry his brother was adorable and lovely, :).
    I like that mushy stuff, lol. I wonder what Arynn meant? Hhhm, when will you post the 5th chappie on P&S?
    Scorpia

    Author's Response:

    Lol. I was gonna have Fred singing All You Need is Love, but I decided I had too much Beatles in the memory. I love writing Fred, he's so great. I've recently gotten interested in the  Hermione/Fred ship (though Dramione is still my fave.) But have no fear, I don't think there'll be romance between them in the future, lol.

    Hmm...I wonder if they do serve Red Bull at Hogwarts. Though they probably call it Red Troll or something like that. :)

    I love mush too, and I'm glad you liked it! Umm...you'll find out what Arynn meant soon! And the next chapter's from Snape's POV, and should be on P&S whenever Jan checks her email. :) (Isn't she the greatest?) But, thanks so much for the review, you're so sweet. You're the greatest!
    GRITS 4ever, girl!
    -Elise

Title: New Faces 24 May 2008 3:07 am
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter Elise, third year was probably my favorite. I'm glad to see you writing a story in that year, :) I may have found a mistake: "Ow!" he yelled in mock anger, and the subject of Snape was forgotten Mr. Weasley and Ms. Granger. This sentence seems fine until you said Mr. Weasley and Ms. Granger, I'm not sure why that's there. She smiled at himand he gave her a lopsided grin back. You need a space between him and and, :) nothing big dear. I spelt Slytherin wrong in a entire chapter, I am supposed to be a fan and I don't even know how to spell Slytherin! Tsk, tsk. Great chappie, so Snape and Remus are friends in this story? I don't think your characters are Mary Sues but then I have only seen a little of them. :)
    Scorpia

    Author's Response:

    Thanks Scorpia! I know, third year's def. my favorite.  Thanks so much for correcting my mistakes! I'll fix it soon, I'll probably go back and do a rewrite once I'm finished. And thanks for saying they're not Mary-Sues. :) I'll probably have a few chapters (maybe 3 or more) out this weekend, since it is a weekend. Well, thanks again!
    Love ya!
    -Elise

Title: Dementors 24 May 2008 2:56 am
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) [Report This]
    It's no fair that you can type so quickly, it takes me at least a week to get a chapter done. :( Oh well, good chapter Elise, that's my girl! Lol, the thing where Harry leaned back against Sev made me smile, :D and say 'Aww!"
    Scorpia

    Author's Response:

    Aw, thanks Scorpia! (You wanna know a secret? I type at night when everyone's asleep. It's a lot easier when no-one's bugging you to get off the computer. And actually, I've never written this much in this little time in my life. Idk, I just keep getting inspiration.)

    Thanks so much, you're so sweet!

    And I'm glad you liked the scene with Harry leaning against Sev. I wasn't sure if it was too early to do that, so thanks!

    Well, love ya, girl! You get...Kisses from Harry, a coupon for Bubble Tea with Draco, and a Coffee date with Sev for reviewing! lol.

    -Elise

Title: Interesting Developments 23 May 2008 11:38 am
Reviewer: Cecilia Farrell (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Arh your so cruel!

    Author's Response:

    hehe. I am, aren't I? lol. I promise, next chapter won't be so mean. Thanks for the review!

    -Elise

Title: Interesting Developments 23 May 2008 7:56 am
Reviewer: Devilishlycute (Signed) [Report This]
    OHHHHHHH I am definately intrigued in knowing how she knows he is a Snape and he doesn't. *grins* Waits patiently as possible for more of your great story.

    Author's Response:

    Aaw, thanks so much! You're sweet! And you'll find out soon, I promise. Thanks for the review!

    Kisses and Coffee!

    -Elise

Title: Interesting Developments 23 May 2008 5:22 am
Reviewer: Jadie (Signed) [Report This]
    Well written, intriguing and original. I am always leery of original characters (especially those with several of the classic signs of mary sues) but the story is good enough that I will reserve judgement.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks! You're much nicer about Arynn and Elisabeth than one of my reviewers of FF.net, so I thank you. And trust me, the girls have a purpose. They're not Mary-Sues. :) I hope you'll keep reading! And I'm glad you think the story is good! That means a lot.

    Thanks again for the review! :)

    -Elise

Title: Interesting Developments 23 May 2008 4:40 am
Reviewer: Pellegrina (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oho, what a mean cliffhanger! Boy, I'm rellay looking forward to find out "your§ secrets! Please update soooooooooooon!

    Author's Response:

    I'm sorry! I really wasn't tryiing to be mean! (Harry: Yeah right. Me: HEY! TRAITOR!) Sorry, I'm crazy, lol

    I will update soon, I promise! Next chapter will be up by tomorrow or saturday! Thanks so much for the review!

    -Elise

Title: Dark dreams 22 May 2008 9:31 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Great beginning! Severus' dream really is chilling, and it seems like Lily is trying to communicate with him. Can't wait to see what happens next!

    Author's Response:

    Aaw, thanks Kristeh! I liked writing that dream, and I'm glad to see that someone thought it was 'chilling'. Next chapter should be up by tonight, or atleast by saturday.

    Thanks so much for the review! Love ya!

    -Elise

Title: New Faces 22 May 2008 3:54 am
Reviewer: Jade_Sullivan (Signed) [Report This]
    Elise! I'm loving this! Your Hermione is the best. lol. Can't wait to see where you take this :) Awesome job, lady.

    Author's Response:

    Aaw, thanks Jade! Hehe, it feels so weird to have you reviewing a story of mine, since I'm in awe of your amazing stories. And thanks, I had so much fun writing Mione. She's one of my favorite characters, and I hope I keep her IC. Thanks so so much for your review. You are the greatest.

    Kisses and Coffee to you!

    -Elise


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