That was SO funny! The snake was cool. Loved this line
“Wakey wakey” hissed his snake
HaHa!!!
| Title: Claustrophobia
| 30 Jul 2008 9:00 am
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| Reviewer: Bil (Anonymous)
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It is a bit OOC but I really enjoyed reading this. It was neat to see Harry calming Snape down and helping him with his claustrophobia and the little snake was awesome. The ending, where Harry and Snape gang up on everyone else, is great. I loved the banter and I was grinning the whole way through. Thanks for the read!
| Title: Claustrophobia
| 06 Jul 2008 4:12 am
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| Reviewer: Morrolan (Anonymous)
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I loved it. Great job.
“only you could find a Gryffindor snake”, Oh, that is so funny, I can see Snape saying that while rolling his eyes.
Excellent story.
| Title: Claustrophobia
| 01 Jun 2008 6:47 pm
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| Reviewer: tabbycat (Anonymous)
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This was totally bizarre, and really good! Though I think you took Harry just slightly too immature after they were rescued. The story was great fun though.
| Title: Claustrophobia
| 30 May 2008 7:21 am
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| Reviewer: Azalea Rose Potter-Black (Anonymous)
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The story was good but the ending... the ending was ridiculus.
| Title: Claustrophobia
| 29 May 2008 11:49 pm
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| Reviewer: hpfan (Anonymous)
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Ohh, just loved this. LOL. Did that too!! :)
| Title: Claustrophobia
| 29 May 2008 10:54 pm
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| Reviewer: Midnight Oil (Anonymous)
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You're right, Snape was OOC, but the whole thing was still pretty funny!
| Title: Claustrophobia
| 29 May 2008 7:35 pm
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| Reviewer: Jazzy (Anonymous)
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Interesting. Good job it was a nice change from the usual stories like this. However, I have to ask do you speak another language? because it is something that i have noticed and it bothers me a bit that people explain parsaltoung (which is another language) as sounding just like English. The thing is that if you spoke another language you would realize that while you can speak and understand it (and I'm talking fluently not just a few words here or there) and you might not notice if you switch between two languages because you are fluent, the other language DOES NOT sound like English. You can understand it and as I said might not realize that someone else is speaking the other language or that you are but there is a distinct difference in the sound.
I hope this makes sense.
| Title: Claustrophobia
| 29 May 2008 7:14 pm
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| Reviewer: MoonKittyru (Anonymous)
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roflmao. that was quite good.
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