Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Of Gurdyroots and Bracelets 16 Mar 2009 12:22 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Lol, poor Snape! Doomed to give points to Gryffindors! I love your Gred and Forge here too; they're very funny and you have the twin talk down. Good work!

    -P.G.
Title: Of Gurdyroots and Bracelets 10 Jun 2008 7:45 pm
Reviewer: tabbycat (Signed) [Report This]
    Very interesting. You have the twins written really well! Hopefully you'll include them alot. (: Also it was a real change having it in dialogue. I think that worked really well.

    Author's Response: Thanks! I have a thing for Gred and Forge, although I've never written them before, so I'm glad you liked them. Also glad you liked the dialogue. Do a lot of authors not use much dialogue? Hmm. Come to think of it, I think there is a lot more dialogue in this story than the other fanfics I've written. Huh. Well, whatever the reason for it, I'm happy you think it works. :)
Title: Of Gurdyroots and Bracelets 10 Jun 2008 5:17 pm
Reviewer: buchling (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Good start. I liked that bracelet. And then this line: "to go where no wizard has gone before!" LOL! Are you into Star Trek? You know like "Snape - the final frontier" I´m really curious how and especially what for Snape is going to award the points.

    Author's Response:

    The bracelet is probably my most favorite original character that I've ever come up with. :) You know, actually, I've only ever seen one Star Trek movie--like, five years ago? I didn't even know that line was FROM Star Trek. Merlin. I'm a subconcious Trekkie! What ever will they think of me over at the Star Wars forums?

    Oh, just you WAIT till you see what Snape awards points for... 

Title: Of Gurdyroots and Bracelets 09 Jun 2008 9:22 pm
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) [Report This]
    I read this in ff.net, welcome to Potions and Snitches and i can not wait for more chapters. I don't think it has been updated on ff.net in a while. Thanks for posting this here!

    Author's Response: Thanks for the welcome. :) Actually, the story is finished over on ff.net...
Title: Of Gurdyroots and Bracelets 09 Jun 2008 4:30 pm
Reviewer: Azalea (Signed) [Report This]
    haha loved it ! can't wait to see what snape does.. i bet he gives people one point at a time cause anymore than that would kill his mortal soul ... :P lol

    Author's Response: Heh heh... Personally, I think that giving ANY points to ANY Gryffindor would kill his mortal soul. Guess I should hold the funeral now before we get to that part of the story...
Title: Of Gurdyroots and Bracelets 09 Jun 2008 4:16 pm
Reviewer: Jade_Sullivan (Signed) [Report This]
    This is fabulous. I feel like I'm reading JKR's work, as everyone is perfectly in character. I can't wait to read more!

    Author's Response: Wow, thanks! There's always that one character that can be tricky to write. Dumbledore in my case. I had a more difficult time with him, so I'm delighted you think I wrote him well. :)
Title: Of Gurdyroots and Bracelets 09 Jun 2008 2:54 pm
Reviewer: sunsethill (Signed) [Report This]
    Nice set up to a story I anticipate eagerly after this first chapter. The writing is smooth and flows without errors or clunky sentences--which is a real blessing.

    Author's Response: Thank you very much. I love fan fiction, but especially in the HP category over on ff.net I get tired of dumpster diving to find a few gems. I am an ex-English major, so I like to think my writing is pretty decent. Of course, writing well and telling a story well are two very different things, aren't they? :P Glad you like the way this one is going. It's only going to be five chapters total. My first fan fiction (which is Star Wars) is currently two years and 420 single-space pages long, and it's nowhere near done, so you can see why I'm proud of myself for managing to write a coherent short story. :)
Title: Of Gurdyroots and Bracelets 09 Jun 2008 7:04 am
Reviewer: theKing (Anonymous) [Report This]
    You definitely have my attention. I hope you update soon. This chapter seems interesting. You wrote the dialogue for the characters really well (like the way it flowed, the characterizations and the lack of cheezy, unfunny lines). And the introduction was entertaining.
    Update again!

    Author's Response: Thank you! I'm happy you liked the dialogue, because there's nothing I hate worse than bad dialogue. Except for bad grammar. And bad spelling. Ex-English major, what can I say? Anyway, thanks for reviewing me. :)

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