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Title: Black and Red and Wet All Over 02 Jul 2008 8:34 pm
Reviewer: NotEvenHere (Anonymous) [Report This]
    LOL I love this. It's just too funny. I was sad to see it end though. I really liked the image of Snape screeching. And red hair, you say? Brill. And I loved this line "Apparted into the lake by way of a rainbow." Wonderful imagery.

    I think my favorite part of this was that charmed bracelet. So funny. Thanks for the laughs, Frodo. Well done! More from you, please. :o)

    Author's Response: Well, short and sweet, they say...And who wouldn't like the idea of Snape wearing Gryffindor red hair? I've tossed around a casual thought or two about a sequel, but no solid ideas yet, so we'll see. :) Thanks for the reviews!
Title: A Near-Death Experience 30 Jun 2008 3:20 am
Reviewer: sunsethill (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh my! Those two sure have gotten in a predicament now, haven't they? I sure hope that we begin to see Severus able to grow up and put the past behind him. I actually have difficulty seeing him so miserable because of Lily since she was not exactly my idea of a wonderful friend. But maybe if he can see more of Lily in Harry it will help.
Title: A Near-Death Experience 29 Jun 2008 1:07 am
Reviewer: tabbycat (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh man! What a totally crazy situation! I thought it was fantastic. Really well written, you managed to keep all the minor details knit together. I particularly loved:
    1) The moment when Snape levitated the shelf off himself
    2) The surreality (is that even a word?) of Snape and Harry cleaning up the office.
    3) The augamenti
    and 4) The scene in the classroom.
    (The red smoke from the office door was a really nice touch).
    Basically it was a brilliant action piece, and I can't wait for the next one.
    Although, I must admit I'm as lost as Harry over the conversation Snape thinks he heard. Also, why did Harry's spell blast through Snape's shield?

    Author's Response:

    Why, thank you! I rather like the Aguamenti bit myself. :) It was about time Snape got a shower, after all... 

    As for the conversation Snape thinks Harry overhead, that would be the one between Snape and Dumbledore in the first chapter. Snape thinks that Harry thinks he can get away with being defiant because Harry overhead Dumbledore come down on Snape about the points thing. A very convoluted and Slytherin-y sort of thing to think, I guess, but that sort of suits him...

     And I figure Harry's Aguamenti would have blasted through Snape's Protego because A) it's water, not a curse or a jinx or something, and more importantly B) Harry's trying to protect Snape, not hurt him (mostly). I don't know if Protego works like that, as I do not have any of the books or JKR available for reference, but if it doesn't, I took the artistic liberty. :)

Title: A Near-Death Experience 28 Jun 2008 11:13 am
Reviewer: fluff (Signed) [Report This]
    That was very funny especially the image of snape stuck to harry by his hair awesome!! A refreshingly different story, looking forward to more.
Title: A Near-Death Experience 28 Jun 2008 3:50 am
Reviewer: Yasona Black (Signed) [Report This]
    ah dang...cliffie plus a wonderful story. amazing and frustrating combination. I love the way you are portraying the characters, they seem very cannon, and it feels like this could have most definitely taken place in the books. good job and update soon please!
Title: A Near-Death Experience 28 Jun 2008 1:21 am
Reviewer: iluvchocs (Signed) [Report This]
    I loved this chapter, especially this line:
    'He managed to defy the laws of physics through sheer dread of what might happen otherwise.' Great job :D
Title: A Near-Death Experience 27 Jun 2008 8:47 pm
Reviewer: crunchgirl (Anonymous) [Report This]
    That was awesome. I'm still laughing.
Title: A Near-Death Experience 27 Jun 2008 8:46 pm
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Hehehe!! love it! :)
Title: Red's the New Black 26 Jun 2008 7:50 pm
Reviewer: tabbycat (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh man! What a predicament! It's brilliant the way you kept us hanging on until the end of the chapter - the suspense is dreadful! And even now, you still havn't told us. /:< Definitely looking forward to the next chapter! (:
    Putting the other professors reactions in was good, particularly mad-eyes. (;
    I thought Snape's day dream must have been particularly embarassing for him - the idea of him sitting there smiling at Harry as he came in was brilliant. lol.
Title: Red's the New Black 26 Jun 2008 10:18 am
Reviewer: iluvchocs (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh boy . . . So basically, the lolly transfigured Harry's hair long and red, because Hermione likes Ron (and it was a bit stuffed up, so it made longer). It didn't do anything else, because Fred and George stuffed it up, and now Harry looks exactly like Lily from a casual (nostalgic) glance. Very plausible. Great job XD

    Author's Response: Precisely. :) Thanks!

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