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Reviews For Red's the New Black
I think my favorite part of this was that charmed bracelet. So funny. Thanks for the laughs, Frodo. Well done! More from you, please. :o) Author's Response: Well, short and sweet, they say...And who wouldn't like the idea of Snape wearing Gryffindor red hair? I've tossed around a casual thought or two about a sequel, but no solid ideas yet, so we'll see. :) Thanks for the reviews!
1) The moment when Snape levitated the shelf off himself 2) The surreality (is that even a word?) of Snape and Harry cleaning up the office. 3) The augamenti and 4) The scene in the classroom. (The red smoke from the office door was a really nice touch). Basically it was a brilliant action piece, and I can't wait for the next one. Although, I must admit I'm as lost as Harry over the conversation Snape thinks he heard. Also, why did Harry's spell blast through Snape's shield? Author's Response: Why, thank you! I rather like the Aguamenti bit myself. :) It was about time Snape got a shower, after all... As for the conversation Snape thinks Harry overhead, that would be the one between Snape and Dumbledore in the first chapter. Snape thinks that Harry thinks he can get away with being defiant because Harry overhead Dumbledore come down on Snape about the points thing. A very convoluted and Slytherin-y sort of thing to think, I guess, but that sort of suits him... And I figure Harry's Aguamenti would have blasted through Snape's Protego because A) it's water, not a curse or a jinx or something, and more importantly B) Harry's trying to protect Snape, not hurt him (mostly). I don't know if Protego works like that, as I do not have any of the books or JKR available for reference, but if it doesn't, I took the artistic liberty. :)
'He managed to defy the laws of physics through sheer dread of what might happen otherwise.' Great job :D
Putting the other professors reactions in was good, particularly mad-eyes. (; I thought Snape's day dream must have been particularly embarassing for him - the idea of him sitting there smiling at Harry as he came in was brilliant. lol.
Author's Response: Precisely. :) Thanks! |
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