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Title: Owl Escapade 13 Aug 2022 10:14 pm
Reviewer: sarahsezlove (Signed) [Report This]
    I’m hooked.
Title: Owl Escapade 29 Jul 2011 5:06 pm
Reviewer: Ebbtide (Signed) [Report This]
    Okay, loving me some Hero Dudley time here. ;). Randomly came across this story and it is KILLING ME that I haven't read it before now. Lovely start to what is sure to be a lovely story.
Title: Owl Escapade 21 Aug 2008 11:32 pm
Reviewer: Wezen Solo (Signed) [Report This]
    Excellent writing! I love the idea of this story (though I don't understand how Voldemort is just...dead.) and how Dudley has finally grown a backbone and stood up for Harry. I love the POV changes and how real the characters seem. Dudley's letters are, in a sad way, of course, funnily realistic. :) Can't wait to read more!
Title: Owl Escapade 18 Jul 2008 5:18 pm
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    I thought I'd already reviewed this! Sorry about that. I loved the beginning. I feel so badly for Harry, and for Hedwig too. Thank goodness she found Hagrid.

    I was so proud of Dudley here! I'm looking forward to more.
Title: Owl Escapade 26 Jun 2008 9:05 pm
Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) [Report This]
    this is a great start, very well written and i think you have dudley just right, as i think he was always caring but took the cue from his parents, anyway keep writing

    Author's Response:

    That's how I've looked at Dudley as well.... I've always thought that he was mislead, but that as a child he still held some of the compassion that had disintigrated within his parents years before. Although he never liked Harry, he would have to feel some empathy at his cousin's state of being, especially as he's grown up with Harry his whole life. He doesn't see Harry as family, really- more like a sevant- but it would be like if someone's nanny was getting hurt like that. Harry's taken care of Dudley his whole life and now it's time for some serious payback. Hopefully my mother will allow me on the internet soon- I can only get on at my father's house right now and I'm not allowed to have documents on his laptop because, you know, it's his and I'm not supposed to be taking it over... As soon as I can, though, I will be updating.This is, I think, the best story I've written so far. Thanks for the review!

Title: Owl Escapade 16 Jun 2008 10:55 pm
Reviewer: AmandaBurke76 (Signed) [Report This]
    Please update soon. great story

    Author's Response: I'll update when I can. I'm not allowed on the computer at my mother's right now, which is where my story is... I'm on my dad's laptop to check reviews, but that's the best I can do right now. When I can, I'll be back in action :)
Title: Owl Escapade 15 Jun 2008 1:00 pm
Reviewer: Cecilia Farrell (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Brill what a refreshingly new story, i hope that you continue with it it has mountains of potential! "To whom it may concern" hupm... the obvious choice is Dumbledore but then Hedwig knows that dumbles sent Harry to live with his foul relatives so might not see him as somebody who could or would help Harry, Hagrid? he seems the more likely candidate given that Hedwig has spent time with the caring half giant and he has been able to heal her problems, but then again he's not the most reliable person. I can't think of anybody else that Hedwig would trust at this juncture, minerva maybe? the Weasleys? certainly. Hmm well i guess we'll find out in the next chapter, pleaseeeee with a chocolate frog on top, continue this story.
    Keep of the fabolous work!
    Cecilia

    Author's Response: I will continue the story when I have the chance; however, I am currently not allowed on the internet (sneaking on right now) because of a poor grade in school. When I am allowed on again there will be many updates :))
Title: Owl Escapade 12 Jun 2008 12:18 am
Reviewer: Mimiheart (Signed) [Report This]
    Great start.
Title: Owl Escapade 10 Jun 2008 1:56 am
Reviewer: mithrilandtj (Anonymous) [Report This]
    So Dudley really does have a heart under all that blubber. Can't wait for the next chapter.
    Hagrid should've recognized Hedwig though. She's the only snowy owl in Hogwarts

    Author's Response:

    Lol, nearly everyone on this sight and on fanfiction has mentioned liking Dudley. I hope you all still like him next chapter... I won't give anything away (especially since I don't exactly know what I'm writing) but I do intend to add more depth to his character... But, yeah, he has a heart. And I'm glad that you're waiting for the next chapter.  

    I don't really get how you wouldn't recognize a snowy owl, however, the challenge itself said she had to be so burnt she wasn't recognizable, so I have it written in that he couldn't tell... and when does it say she's the only snowy owl in Hogwarts? not to mention the fact that it's summer time, so it could have been any owl, not just a hogwarts owl. That's what I think makes it a little more realistic, even if I would have written the challenge differently.

Title: Owl Escapade 09 Jun 2008 10:45 pm
Reviewer: Dragonanzar (Signed) [Report This]
    wow, i never thought of dudley dursley in that way. i never thought he could be anything but a model of his parents. please update soon.

    Author's Response: I will update as soon as I can but for the next two weeks I can only get on at odd intervals between studying for finals... after two weeks from now it should pick up, as should my other story (I don't know if you read that, so I thought I'd mention it)... Glad you like Dudley!

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