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Reviews For Burnt Out
Good chpter, keep it up :D Author's Response: yeah, sorry about that. I'll update more quickly in the future, I swear. I was grounded *sigh*. glad you liked it, though
Now all he needs to do is heal Harry. Please update again soon! Author's Response: "all he has to do is heal Harry"... lol. You say that like it's going to be easy.
Author's Response: Harry's life would be hard to overlook at this point, wouldn't it?
Author's Response: One of my favorite things to write about is teenagers going against their "ingrained prejudices" and learning to think for themselves.
And thank goodness Severus arrived when he did! Harry does sound like he's in bad shape. I hope Severus can help! Oh, I loved the 'Hodfog' comment! Author's Response: I'm glad you liked my epiphany. Those kind of introspective scenes are sort of hard for me to write- so I do a lot of them in order to get better at it.... And I've gotten about five comments on the 'Hodfog' part which I find amusing since I hardly even thought about it whn I added it in there.
Also love Sev's little lie well technically not a lie "I came from Scotland. What did you expect?" yeah right it took him like 2 seconds to come from Scotland. Love it...Please update soon Author's Response: Gryffindor.. I hadn't even thought about it in those terms. Lol. And the Severus part- that's what we call a non answer. Manipulating the thoughts of others. Very Slytherin (and fun to write)
I really liked the way you handled the descriptions and the conversations. I especially liked the way you showed Severus' frustration when Hedwig arrived in the middle of the night. Of course, he wouldn't necessarily know that Hedwig was Harry's owl so his assumption that it was Dumbledore pestering him was perfectly reasonable. Bravo! Author's Response: thanks, i'm glad you liked it. i'm glad you liked my dialogue and my descriptions... and severus is, of course, severus. |
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