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Title: Mistaken Conceptions 07 Aug 2008 7:02 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Another great chapter! Severus was wonderful with Harry, and it should be really interesting with Dudley along for the ride too!

    Author's Response: Even the old bat has a hard time being cruel in such a situation... Don't expect every chapter to be full of fluff, none of our three characters have a great deal of patience, injuries aside.. But such is life, right?
Title: Mistaken Conceptions 07 Aug 2008 6:44 am
Reviewer: iluvchocs (Signed) [Report This]
    Thanks for the update :D You did a great job on this chapter; I really liked the way Snape let Dudley help him out a bit, and the fact that we'll get to see more of Dudley XD

    Author's Response: I wasn't sure how I was going to play Dudley out- I usually let my writing take off and see where it gets me. In such cases, reviewers have a lot of pull, which is why I always ask people to give me their feedback. Everyone seemed to like Dudley,which I worried over since I've never written his character before and since I kind of made him OOC... but anyway, people seemed to like him and think he added to the story so I decided to pull him along for the ride. It should be interesting.
Title: Mistaken Conceptions 07 Aug 2008 6:11 am
Reviewer: le skrewt (Anonymous) [Report This]
    interesting 1st 3 chapters. can't believe snape has to take dudley... poor snape... ugh dudley :P harry is really messed up, it will be interesting to see how this evolves!
Title: Mistaken Conceptions 07 Aug 2008 5:12 am
Reviewer: strangergirl86 (Signed) [Report This]
    I like when Dudley is introduced into the wizarding world. Thanks for the update.
Title: Mistaken Conceptions 07 Aug 2008 4:55 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Great job here! I like how patient Severus was being with both harry and Dudley. And now he's got two of them for the summer! Is THAT going to be a real thrill! I wonder how long it will take before Snape's hair turns gray?

    Author's Response:

    I don't know that it will literally turn grey, i think he's too stubborn for that, but it will certainly be interesting.

     

Title: Mistaken Conceptions 07 Aug 2008 4:34 am
Reviewer: jolisgsd (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Interesting to add Dudley to the mix!

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