Awww!! Squee! Harry didn't want Dudley to suffer. omg. This story is just so great and I love the way you've changed their relationship because of this trauma. Totally in character and realistic. Love it, love it, love it!
| Title: Olive Branch
| 06 Apr 2009 11:47 pm
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| Reviewer: Rebel_Dream (Anonymous)
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| Title: Olive Branch
| 02 Mar 2009 7:32 pm
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| Reviewer: Sarah (Anonymous)
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Great so far, I'm excited to see where it's going. I hope you update soon!
When will it be continued? Soon, I hope...no, I trust you for another chapter soon! REALLY SOON!!! Please?
| Title: Olive Branch
| 02 Feb 2009 5:49 pm
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| Reviewer: Tekky (Anonymous)
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Another great story, although I think the change in duds personality is a bit too large (but my HP knowledge is slightly low, so don't take anything I say too seriously =P)
But I like it, waiting for next chapter.
Author's Response: yeah... the change in his personality stems from something that happened in the last book... and literary liscense, of course.
| Title: Olive Branch
| 04 Jan 2009 9:28 pm
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| Reviewer: Kermitty (Anonymous)
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I hope you will update anytime soon. I like this story. I think it's nice that someone involves Dudley in their stories.
Love,
Kermitty
| Title: Olive Branch
| 03 Nov 2008 2:58 am
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| Reviewer: Snapesthe1 (Anonymous)
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I can just see Snape groaning and picturing how trying it will be to deal with Harry:)
I like the way Dudley and Harry are starting to resolve their differences. And also that Sev is learning how Harry was treated.
Author's Response: I thought it was important that Snape didn't just believe, right off the back, that Harry's life was imperfect and start loving Harry wholeheartedly from the get go. I can picture it taking a lot of time and that each little situation would heighten that. Plus I can't see him being as affected by Harry's bloodied state at the beginning of the summer as other people were; as a Death Eater he'd have seen a lot of that. I thought that the long term neglect and emotional torture would affect him more.
| Title: Olive Branch
| 02 Nov 2008 9:13 pm
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| Reviewer: Mysterious Jedi (Anonymous)
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Good chapter. I'm glad Harry and Dudley are considerate of each other. Snape seems pretty in character,too.
Author's Response: I'm glad that you think that Snape seems in character... I was trying not to make him have this big drastic change all at once, although I don't know how long I'll be able to carry on the snarky persona before I have to develop him a bit.
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