This is a very interesting story. Poor Harry! I love your version of Dudley, though. I can't wait for more!
Title: Decorum Disaster
| 03 Jun 2009 11:05 pm
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Reviewer: Baghi (Signed)
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Good start. Hope everything turns out okay, RL, and you don't have to leave us hanging too long.
Title: Decorum Disaster
| 17 Apr 2009 5:03 am
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Reviewer: Rebel_Dream (Anonymous)
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Title: Decorum Disaster
| 11 Apr 2009 9:12 pm
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Reviewer: HeartStar (Anonymous)
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I love this story please update soon!!!!!!!!
Definitely enjoyed - loved the way Snape managed to trick Harry into eating his lunch! I'm curious about what Snape will say about the essay Harry worked so hard on... and about whether Harry can manage to find a way to get out of staying another week! Great chapter.
Author's Response: Well, I'm glad that you're curious, although I don't intend to tell you the answers. Gotta have you coming back, don't want to spoil it. Thanks for the review! ~Cait
Best chapter yet, seriously! Good insight into Harry's unwillingness to disobey even in the smallest things. I also really liked the bit where Snape tricked Harry into eating lunch. :-)
Author's Response: Thank you!!! I'm glad that it was worth the wait *grins sheepishly*... I'm hoping that the newfound insight insn't a fluke thing on my behalf- i'm taking psychology this semester and i'm hoping i'm actually learning something.
Hmm I think I may need to re read this...I seem to have forgotten some things...I thought Harry was already at Snapes house...never mind lol I will just look back, good chapter though : )
really well done. I like how Snape got Harry to eat and take medicine without threatening him and how he realizes there at the end that he ahs to take it slowly and not yell because Harry is so damaged. The chess game was a nice touch too and I look forward to seeing more of how they all interact together.
Oh, and Sev's last comment was priceless!
Author's Response: Haha, thank you for the great review. I'm glad that you like how Snape is acting- I hope that I'm not moving him OOC too soon, but it seems imperative that he tone things down a bit because of how damaged Harry is... Obviously he still has a temper on him, but I'm trying to get him to deal with it better than he does in the books.
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