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Title: Sleep Disturbed 19 Jul 2008 6:09 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Sev, he never does catch a break, huh? Too bad he picked the wrong time to catch up on his sleep! And Vernon's reaction to Dudley defending Harry was just as I'd have pictured it. I loved it when Severus stunned him.

    Now all he needs to do is heal Harry. Please update again soon!

    Author's Response: "all he has to do is heal Harry"... lol. You say that like it's going to be easy.
Title: Sleep Disturbed 19 Jul 2008 3:01 am
Reviewer: sweets2 (Signed) [Report This]
    Hodfog LOL. I think Snape is starting to see that Potter doesn't live the life he always thought of. Update soon.

    Author's Response: Harry's life would be hard to overlook at this point, wouldn't it?
Title: Sleep Disturbed 18 Jul 2008 9:47 pm
Reviewer: Mysterious Jedi (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Good chapter. I like this new and courageous Dudley. looking forward to more.
Title: Sleep Disturbed 18 Jul 2008 6:58 pm
Reviewer: KimSpiritTalks (Signed) [Report This]
    I love Dudley in your story! He really came through, ingrained predjudices and all. Really good chapter.

    Author's Response: One of my favorite things to write about is teenagers going against their "ingrained prejudices" and learning to think for themselves.
Title: Sleep Disturbed 18 Jul 2008 5:25 pm
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Another brilliant chapter! I was really proud of Dudley here! You wrote the scene where he has his epiphany very well. Good for him for standing up to Vernon, too.

    And thank goodness Severus arrived when he did! Harry does sound like he's in bad shape. I hope Severus can help!

    Oh, I loved the 'Hodfog' comment!

    Author's Response: I'm glad you liked my epiphany. Those kind of introspective scenes are sort of hard for me to write- so I do a lot of them in order to get better at it.... And I've gotten about five comments on the 'Hodfog' part which I find amusing since I hardly even thought about it whn I added it in there.
Title: Sleep Disturbed 18 Jul 2008 5:24 pm
Reviewer: Keats (Signed) [Report This]
    So typical Sev waiting until 7 am to read the message... but who I really loved is Dudley. 10 cheers to Dudley for standing up to his Dad to protect Harry and not backing down even when Vernon hit him. He also has no fear in talking to Sev standing up to him and rebuking him; I just love Dudley. Never really thought of Dudley as being Gryffindor in nature but he shows great bravery.
    Also love Sev's little lie well technically not a lie "I came from Scotland. What did you expect?" yeah right it took him like 2 seconds to come from Scotland.
    Love it...Please update soon

    Author's Response: Gryffindor.. I hadn't even thought about it in those terms. Lol. And the Severus part- that's what we call a non answer. Manipulating the thoughts of others. Very Slytherin (and fun to write)
Title: Owl Escapade 18 Jul 2008 5:18 pm
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    I thought I'd already reviewed this! Sorry about that. I loved the beginning. I feel so badly for Harry, and for Hedwig too. Thank goodness she found Hagrid.

    I was so proud of Dudley here! I'm looking forward to more.
Title: Sleep Disturbed 18 Jul 2008 4:58 pm
Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) [Report This]
    i'm glad harry has been found and hopefully saved by severus before he gets any worse
Title: Sleep Disturbed 18 Jul 2008 3:45 pm
Reviewer: dancingkatz (Signed) [Report This]
    Excellent chapter! Good for Dudley! At last he's starting to become aware of the needsand feelings and conditions of other people. I wouldn't expect him to turn into a saint but this is encouraging. And now that Severus is there Harry has a chance.

    I really liked the way you handled the descriptions and the conversations. I especially liked the way you showed Severus' frustration when Hedwig arrived in the middle of the night. Of course, he wouldn't necessarily know that Hedwig was Harry's owl so his assumption that it was Dumbledore pestering him was perfectly reasonable. Bravo!

    Author's Response: thanks, i'm glad you liked it. i'm glad you liked my dialogue and my descriptions... and severus is, of course, severus.
Title: Sleep Disturbed 18 Jul 2008 10:23 am
Reviewer: strangergirl86 (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter, it made me smile."Hodfog," Oh man that is so typical Dudley. Thanks.

    Author's Response: hehe. dudley's fun to write. I mean, i don't know if i could have him in every fanfic i write, but for this one it's nice to have him added in. it's a little out of my normal zone which makes it fun. and everyone seems to like the way i write him, so that's reassuring. :))

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