| Title: Quidditch Fanatics
| 30 May 2010 4:50 am
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| Reviewer: shadowienne (Anonymous)
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I loved this chapter! Finally, some well-deserved fun with friends, and even Snape took it rather well! You really have a gift for capturing the atmosphere of a scene. Am looking forward to your next update!
| Title: Decorum Disaster
| 30 May 2010 4:37 am
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| Reviewer: shadowienne (Anonymous)
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Yep-- now that Harry is on the mend, Snape will definitely have his hands full! But he's made a good start at changing his own attitude toward Harry. (Just wonder how long he'll be able to maintain the "new Snape"!)
| Title: Familiar Ways
| 30 May 2010 4:14 am
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| Reviewer: shadowienne (Anonymous)
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Wow! It's so amazing to see Dudley's "take charge" attitude, to the extent that he's actually explaining things about Harry to Snape! You've really created a whole new dynamic among these three characters! Way to go!
| Title: Mistaken Conceptions
| 30 May 2010 4:03 am
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| Reviewer: shadowienne (Anonymous)
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So Dudley's going along for the ride-- this just keeps getting better and better! Can't wait for the next chapter!
| Title: Sleep Disturbed
| 30 May 2010 3:52 am
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| Reviewer: shadowienne (Anonymous)
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I really like the way you've created Dudley's changing personality in this story. And he stood up to Vernon! GOOOOOO DUDLEEEYYYYY!
I absolutely love this story so far! I've never read a story where Dudley came along before except one of my own about Dudley where he ended up in the Wizarding world.
Just a question: You mentioned Dudley will be going to hogwarts... he's not a wizard, so will he be going to school there? Or is he a wizard and you haven't said it yet?
I've noticed a few spelling errors now and again, but nothing too serious. Keep up the great work!
Your ideas are fantastic!
I'm so happy that you updated again. Great chapter. It was really nice of Severus to let Harry's friends visit and I'm liking Dudley here, too.
It was so cute and funny that Severus was eavesdropping and the kids knew it all along.
I'm looking forward to more!
| Title: Quidditch Fanatics
| 24 Feb 2010 11:55 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Loved the rum balls! As if hermione would allow that! Thank you for updating
nice, i always thought that Dudley wasn't so bad.. i like how this is going
cool about Snape letting the Weasleys' and Hermione visit..
Severus might as well get used to this crowd if he is keeping Harry and Dudley. He might want to work on gaining at least a little more patience, though, I have to say that I adore a good snarky Severus Snape. Wonderful story so far! I hope to read more really soon.
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