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Title: The Loss of a Loved One 23 Aug 2008 5:10 pm
Reviewer: Syret (Signed) [Report This]
    I gave you a 10 but, if I could I'd give you a 20. Love your story!!!
Title: The Loss of a Loved One 12 Jul 2008 9:24 pm
Reviewer: jennybliss (Signed) [Report This]
    This first chapter was so sad it made me cry.

    Author's Response: Wow thank you so much! It's always great to hear little comments like that, it means alot to me
Title: The Loss of a Loved One 11 Jul 2008 4:41 am
Reviewer: celestialuna (Signed) [Report This]
    Very good start.
Title: The Loss of a Loved One 06 Jul 2008 5:37 pm
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) [Report This]
    I thought Severus seemed a little out of character in some places. But, It's harder to day because this is before Harry goes to Hogwarts. So over the years he may of changed into his dark, grumpy self while Harry wasat the Dursleys. It's a good idea, i want to see more baby Harry! Are you going to show how they grom as a family like the story Eight or are you going to skip to Harry's Hogwarts years? Will there be any Draco...(grin) A Sexy Snape? Who would of thought, lol. Keep it up!
    Scorpia
Title: The Loss of a Loved One 05 Jul 2008 5:57 am
Reviewer: khjf (Anonymous) [Report This]
    good so far, can't wait to see more!
Title: The Loss of a Loved One 03 Jul 2008 8:54 pm
Reviewer: angel (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I really like this, update soon! It sounds as if this is going to turn out to be really good.
Title: The Loss of a Loved One 03 Jul 2008 1:48 pm
Reviewer: Phoenix1 (Signed) [Report This]
    interesting beginning. I look forward to the next chapter.
Title: The Loss of a Loved One 03 Jul 2008 5:25 am
Reviewer: Keats (Signed) [Report This]
    love your first chapter looking forward to reading your story
Title: The Loss of a Loved One 03 Jul 2008 2:35 am
Reviewer: dancingkatz (Signed) [Report This]
    A lovely and heartbreaking beginning. I look forward to reading more of this story.
Title: The Loss of a Loved One 03 Jul 2008 1:35 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    I think this is a really good story so far, and I like how you made Severus rescue Harry and cry over Lily's death. It's something I could see him doing. Will Albus allow him to adopt Harry?

    One other note, I did notice some spelling and a few grammatical errors in this chapter that you might want to fix. Sorry, I'm a former English teacher and can't help correcting things. If you'd like me to proofread it, I'd be glad to.

    Author's Response:

    I'm glad you like it, you wouldn't believe how worried i was that everyone would see it and then instantly hate it. Also, I would LOVE you to proofread my work, actually, I've been looking for someone to do that for awhile now. I didn't want to post up the next chapter while the first one was in a state of disarray.

    If you really are interested in looking over my work for me my email is jayllenrup@gmail.com, just send notice my way and I'll send you back a chapter to read through.

    Hope to hear from you soon,

    Jennifer-Rose. 


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