Potions and Snitches
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Title: Fights between Brothers 25 Dec 2008 7:17 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    So far this is a really interesting story. I have one critique though: I work around 4 year-olds and your kids act way more mature than those at age 4. I think you should make them age 8 instead, which would be about 2nd grade.

    I'm excited to see what happens next!

    -P.G.
Title: Fights between Brothers 11 Jul 2008 4:52 am
Reviewer: celestialuna (Signed) [Report This]
    Good chapter.
Title: Fights between Brothers 09 Jul 2008 9:08 pm
Reviewer: fdg (Anonymous) [Report This]
    thanks for writing!! I always wanted a story like this!
Title: Fights between Brothers 09 Jul 2008 6:09 am
Reviewer: darkwish (Signed) [Report This]
    i really like this story i wish i could get a notice when you update
Title: Fights between Brothers 08 Jul 2008 9:32 pm
Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed) [Report This]
    This is they way that they will have to grow up.

    If they find out that Dumbledore oblivated their teacher in order for them to stay at the Dursleys, I hope they never forgive him.

    It is good that they have each other.
Title: Fights between Brothers 08 Jul 2008 9:06 pm
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    This is one of my favorite chapters. I love the way the two brothers interact and how they are willing to try and protect each other. Can't wait to see what happens when they go to school.
Title: Fights between Brothers 08 Jul 2008 6:43 pm
Reviewer: Nightshade (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Nice work! This story is really good so far. Please update soon! :)
    Thanks

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