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Title: Goblins and Galleons 05 Mar 2010 2:39 am
Reviewer: tabbycat (Signed) [Report This]
    Hi, This story looks great. I'll definitely come back to it. Why is Hayden only 95% human though? Is it the spells magic dampening the rest or something? And you can tell we're odd... ;)
Title: Goblins and Galleons 08 Jun 2009 4:30 am
Reviewer: Rebel_Dream (Anonymous) [Report This]
    wow. loved it. can not wait for the next chapter
Title: Goblins and Galleons 14 Jan 2009 3:52 am
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    Can't remember the last time I read a chapter of this story...

    I'm really glad Hagrid got the boys and is preparing them for Hogwarts :) It's sad though, how some people look down on Hayden, and how upset the story made him feel. The cover story Dumbledore created is interesting, but I found it kind of funny in a way that he basically said Snape went mad, cause I'm sure if Snape heard that story he'd be all indignant, lol.

    I wonder what the blood test will reveal? Will it tell them that Hayden is Snape? Also, if told his true identity, I wonder how he would react to that...

    Anyways, I hope to see another update soon!
Title: Goblins and Galleons 13 Jan 2009 9:31 pm
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww, I feel really bad for Hayden! Half of a person indeed! Albus needs his head examined! I like how harry stuck up for him and all. The part with the Goblin was nice and I'm glad they split the Galleons evenly. Update soon please!
Title: Goblins and Galleons 13 Jan 2009 8:58 pm
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Good for harry, defending his brother like that. hagrid is a nice man, but he trusts Dumbles too much, in my opinion. Glad you updated.
Title: Goblins and Galleons 13 Jan 2009 7:39 pm
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh dear, that's really scary. After all, Hayden has technically gotten on the Goblin's bad side--I wouldn't be surprised if he was attacked. I dislike how the boys have gotten separated too; they need to realize that it's much safer for them to be together during this. Good work and please update soon! I'm really curious if the potion will say that he's related to the Princes or not.

    -P.G.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you. I'm working on getting a quicker update this time - school holi's are good for that.

    Jen.

Title: Goblins and Galleons 13 Jan 2009 6:14 pm
Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor, poor Hayden. I wonder if these school days are going to be any happier than his first school days.

    I am thinking that that blood test may reveal some not too pleasant results.

    Looking forward to more.

    Author's Response:

    Of course they will! Just minorly better... Oh, he'll get over it. :P

    Thank you!

Title: Goblins and Galleons 13 Jan 2009 4:22 pm
Reviewer: Alexander (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Hi, just read your entire story and really liked it. I like this story. But I'm curious as to why Severus is 95% human since he was the de-aged Severus Snape?

    I went to look at the pic at your gallery but it sent me to a page that said "file not found". The rest of your art was quite impressive and I am curious to see the pic of Harry and Hayden. I would not have given bad criticism on your art since I have no artistic talent at all. Can only draw stick figures. Lol.

    Please continue to update this story as I intend to check back for updates.

    Yours sincerely,
    Alex

    Author's Response:

    Hello! Thank you verry much.

    Severus is 95% Human becuase I say so. :P Nah, let me explain. (I think I might changed it down to only 2%) Comes from the Prince line. I'm going to write in that several family's have werewolf, veela, vampire, eleve, fae or something else in their bloodlines at some point. To keep the magic strong. Of course with this their will be some family's that didn't, only ever marrying pureblood humans. Even if they are cousins.  It would very distant in severus's line. But it was sort of the other alternative to incest or marrying a muggle. Who purebloods would also see as a creature but without the benefit's of being magical.
    So Severus's would be a vampire, hence his pale skin and his physical posture and such. But besides that, it won't have much to do with anything. Like I said, quite a few familys have something not fully human in their bloodlines.
    An example would be someone like fleur,  whose family has recently cross breeded with a a creature. Her mother, who was a half blood, would be allowed an account. Whereas her grandmother who was an veela would not. Also the child of a veela and a half veela would not be allowed an account. This is the law the ministy has enforced about magical sentient creautres. But it varries, while say a centur could not get an account, a werewolf could. But the Ministry also want to make it illeagal for them.

    This is all fairly Minor stuff, but Hayden will find out and try to support magical creature rights even though by wizard standards, he isn't. He'll feel drawn to help them after Remus. You'll see -- Later. :)

     

    http://ii-jennyfish-ii.deviantart.com/art/Harry-and-Hayden-109099101

    I've had a look at the link... See if this works.

    Jen.


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