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Title: Goblins and Galleons 13 Jan 2009 6:14 pm
Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor, poor Hayden. I wonder if these school days are going to be any happier than his first school days.

    I am thinking that that blood test may reveal some not too pleasant results.

    Looking forward to more.

    Author's Response:

    Of course they will! Just minorly better... Oh, he'll get over it. :P

    Thank you!

Title: Goblins and Galleons 13 Jan 2009 4:22 pm
Reviewer: Alexander (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Hi, just read your entire story and really liked it. I like this story. But I'm curious as to why Severus is 95% human since he was the de-aged Severus Snape?

    I went to look at the pic at your gallery but it sent me to a page that said "file not found". The rest of your art was quite impressive and I am curious to see the pic of Harry and Hayden. I would not have given bad criticism on your art since I have no artistic talent at all. Can only draw stick figures. Lol.

    Please continue to update this story as I intend to check back for updates.

    Yours sincerely,
    Alex

    Author's Response:

    Hello! Thank you verry much.

    Severus is 95% Human becuase I say so. :P Nah, let me explain. (I think I might changed it down to only 2%) Comes from the Prince line. I'm going to write in that several family's have werewolf, veela, vampire, eleve, fae or something else in their bloodlines at some point. To keep the magic strong. Of course with this their will be some family's that didn't, only ever marrying pureblood humans. Even if they are cousins.  It would very distant in severus's line. But it was sort of the other alternative to incest or marrying a muggle. Who purebloods would also see as a creature but without the benefit's of being magical.
    So Severus's would be a vampire, hence his pale skin and his physical posture and such. But besides that, it won't have much to do with anything. Like I said, quite a few familys have something not fully human in their bloodlines.
    An example would be someone like fleur,  whose family has recently cross breeded with a a creature. Her mother, who was a half blood, would be allowed an account. Whereas her grandmother who was an veela would not. Also the child of a veela and a half veela would not be allowed an account. This is the law the ministy has enforced about magical sentient creautres. But it varries, while say a centur could not get an account, a werewolf could. But the Ministry also want to make it illeagal for them.

    This is all fairly Minor stuff, but Hayden will find out and try to support magical creature rights even though by wizard standards, he isn't. He'll feel drawn to help them after Remus. You'll see -- Later. :)

     

    http://ii-jennyfish-ii.deviantart.com/art/Harry-and-Hayden-109099101

    I've had a look at the link... See if this works.

    Jen.

Title: Hagrid's Tale 28 Dec 2008 3:38 am
Reviewer: ObsessiveaboutSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    !!!!!!!!!!
    How could you DO that????
    Oh wow. Please update soon!

    Author's Response:

    It's not my fualt, the plot bunny made me do it!

     

    THe next updates gonna be while. I'm going to the coast for summer holi's right now. :)

Title: Hagrid's Tale 25 Dec 2008 8:42 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    That's really sad, having people think that Hayden is evil and only half a person. I imagine he's going to have much worse problems than Harry during the next seven years.

    What a story about the fate of Severus--throwing himself off the Astronomy Tower, woah. I wonder if Hayden knows it's a lie...

    How many people know the truth about Hayden? Does Hagrid know, or is it just Minerva and Dumbledore?

    Great job--please update soon!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response:

    Hayden currently does not know that the story of Severus's fate is lie. But that is due to the fact he knows next to nothing about severus or any wizard for that matter. He will of course, find out later that iut was all lie. Much later.

     Not many know the truth of who Hayden is. But if I told you, I'd have to kill you :) ... Not really. But, I'm not saying yet. 

     Thank you!

Title: Rubeus Hagrid 25 Dec 2008 8:36 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    I kind of feel bad that they refer to Hayden as "Harry Potter's Shadow." I imagine this lack of equality will cause some problems in the future.

    -P.G.

    P.S. I really love your quotes before each chapter.
Title: Lily's Letters 25 Dec 2008 7:36 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, this is getting juicy now. I really like that you put it out in the open that Hayden was not originally part of the family. I wonder what he'll think of it--he won't forget, that's for sure.

    I'm not sure if you mentioned how old the boys were in this chapter, though you might have and I just missed it. I was really happy that Severus read the letter though because it's like he remembers how to read well, whereas Harry would not know how to and would have to sound things out and such. I wonder if Harry realizes that Sev can do that and he cannot...

    Great chapter!

    -P.G.
Title: Fights between Brothers 25 Dec 2008 7:17 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    So far this is a really interesting story. I have one critique though: I work around 4 year-olds and your kids act way more mature than those at age 4. I think you should make them age 8 instead, which would be about 2nd grade.

    I'm excited to see what happens next!

    -P.G.
Title: Hagrid's Tale 05 Dec 2008 7:37 am
Reviewer: Elfwyn (Anonymous) [Report This]
    It was wrong and cowardly of Dumbledore to have Hagrid of all people tell a tale like that to Harry and Hayden. He is so oblivious and truly doesn't know how to comfort a distressed child.
Title: Hagrid's Tale 05 Dec 2008 3:26 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Hayden! It must be an awful burden, and now it looks like Harry gets favored, which can only lead to jealousy between them. Great job, but then you already knew that, right? :)

    Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: Hagrid's Tale 04 Dec 2008 9:56 pm
Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed) [Report This]
    And it just keeps plying on poor Hayden.

    Albus really told that story to people and they believed it??!!! Wizards are dumber than I thought.

    Poor Hayden.

    Author's Response:

    ... I never said every Wizard believed it =P

    There will be some who don't believe, but Albus caries alot of wieght in the wizarding world. He could tell them that Pink elephants stole Severus and there would still be some that believed him. But yes, some wizards can be very stuid.

    Thank you for your review,

    Jay.


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