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Reviews For My Brother, My Hero
I am thinking that that blood test may reveal some not too pleasant results. Looking forward to more. Author's Response: Of course they will! Just minorly better... Oh, he'll get over it. :P Thank you!
I went to look at the pic at your gallery but it sent me to a page that said "file not found". The rest of your art was quite impressive and I am curious to see the pic of Harry and Hayden. I would not have given bad criticism on your art since I have no artistic talent at all. Can only draw stick figures. Lol. Please continue to update this story as I intend to check back for updates. Yours sincerely, Alex Author's Response: Hello! Thank you verry much. Severus is 95% Human becuase I say so. :P Nah, let me explain. (I think I might changed it down to only 2%) Comes from the Prince line. I'm going to write in that several family's have werewolf, veela, vampire, eleve, fae or something else in their bloodlines at some point. To keep the magic strong. Of course with this their will be some family's that didn't, only ever marrying pureblood humans. Even if they are cousins. It would very distant in severus's line. But it was sort of the other alternative to incest or marrying a muggle. Who purebloods would also see as a creature but without the benefit's of being magical. This is all fairly Minor stuff, but Hayden will find out and try to support magical creature rights even though by wizard standards, he isn't. He'll feel drawn to help them after Remus. You'll see -- Later. :)
http://ii-jennyfish-ii.deviantart.com/art/Harry-and-Hayden-109099101 I've had a look at the link... See if this works. Jen.
How could you DO that???? Oh wow. Please update soon! Author's Response: It's not my fualt, the plot bunny made me do it!
THe next updates gonna be while. I'm going to the coast for summer holi's right now. :)
What a story about the fate of Severus--throwing himself off the Astronomy Tower, woah. I wonder if Hayden knows it's a lie... How many people know the truth about Hayden? Does Hagrid know, or is it just Minerva and Dumbledore? Great job--please update soon! -P.G. Author's Response: Hayden currently does not know that the story of Severus's fate is lie. But that is due to the fact he knows next to nothing about severus or any wizard for that matter. He will of course, find out later that iut was all lie. Much later. Not many know the truth of who Hayden is. But if I told you, I'd have to kill you :) ... Not really. But, I'm not saying yet. Thank you!
-P.G. P.S. I really love your quotes before each chapter.
I'm not sure if you mentioned how old the boys were in this chapter, though you might have and I just missed it. I was really happy that Severus read the letter though because it's like he remembers how to read well, whereas Harry would not know how to and would have to sound things out and such. I wonder if Harry realizes that Sev can do that and he cannot... Great chapter! -P.G.
I'm excited to see what happens next! -P.G.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Albus really told that story to people and they believed it??!!! Wizards are dumber than I thought. Poor Hayden. Author's Response: ... I never said every Wizard believed it =P There will be some who don't believe, but Albus caries alot of wieght in the wizarding world. He could tell them that Pink elephants stole Severus and there would still be some that believed him. But yes, some wizards can be very stuid. Thank you for your review, Jay. |
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