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Title: The Loss of a Loved One 23 Aug 2008 5:10 pm
Reviewer: Syret (Signed) [Report This]
    I gave you a 10 but, if I could I'd give you a 20. Love your story!!!
Title: Accidental Magic 11 Aug 2008 1:41 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    I loved the haircut and the climb down the roof. Somebody should have reported Petunia to some authorities, however, since she didn't even go with the twins to the hospital. Poor severus, knowing something is not quite right, but afraid to find out the truth. Can't wait to see what happens at Hogwarts! Keep up the great work! :)
Title: Accidental Magic 10 Aug 2008 10:17 am
Reviewer: ReginaCaeli (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great chapter,I'm a bit worried about the state of Severus' mind when he re-ages,he will be soo confused won't he.
Title: Accidental Magic 10 Aug 2008 10:07 am
Reviewer: Laume (Anonymous) [Report This]
    First Dumbledore says he wants Severus to have a happy childhood and then he obliviates someone who reports their abuse? So much for sincerity, eh? Disgusting old man.
Title: Accidental Magic 10 Aug 2008 3:50 am
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    This story is really interesting, I've yet to read another fanfic with this scenario. I like that Harry has a brother, it helps the bad situations along. Can’t wait till they go to Hogwarts and hope to read more soon!
Title: Accidental Magic 10 Aug 2008 2:31 am
Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor, poor Severus - to know that he doesn't belong with Harry but wants to stay to help him.

    I hope, once they get to Hogwarts, that he has a better life. But knowing Severus's fate, I am not counting on it.
Title: Lily's Letters 25 Jul 2008 7:14 am
Reviewer: Munchkin (Signed) [Report This]
    I like this story very much. This is a 'What If?' I've never seen before. I have one question, after 'Hayden' turns eighteen, will he become twenty-one, the age he was de-aged at, or thrity-eight, the age he's supposed to be? Also, there is a few spelling mistakes in your story. The first I saw is in the first chapter, where it says beautiful even death, I assume there is supposed to be an 'in' in there. The second I saw is a missed comma in between nervous and hyper in this chapter.
    Anyway, sorry about that but I tend to correct spelling and punctuation in stories in my head, whether I want to or not.
    Please update soon!

    Author's Response:

    Hi, thanks for the feedback btw. To answer you question;

    Hayden will be his true age. One of the reason Dumbldore didn't want to use it was becuase the instant re-ageing puts alot of pressure on the body and a man his age could die from that. I'll go over that more later in an other chapter. 

    Thank you for your crique, I'll fix it ASAP.

    Jen. 

Title: The Loss of a Loved One 12 Jul 2008 9:24 pm
Reviewer: jennybliss (Signed) [Report This]
    This first chapter was so sad it made me cry.

    Author's Response: Wow thank you so much! It's always great to hear little comments like that, it means alot to me
Title: Lily's Letters 12 Jul 2008 8:40 am
Reviewer: celestialuna (Signed) [Report This]
    good chapter.
Title: Lily's Letters 11 Jul 2008 11:19 pm
Reviewer: jflame (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wow! Tension anyone? Fab work Jennifer, im on baited hook for the next chap.

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