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Reviews For Where Shadows Go
lol for lockhart lily, how could you fall for that one? Author's Response: Don't know, but I think he's an ace Healer! Poor Lily, she was vulnerable. But luckily she had Sev around to get her back on track.
Author's Response: Thanks a lot! I've just posted chapter five!
Author's Response: Umm...you'll know when you see the next chapter title.
Author's Response: Thanks, my sister is a doctor and she tells me funny stories all the time about herself and patients who think she has no life outside of the hospital.
Author's Response: So does my sister! And I really don't like Lockhart either!
Harry was being a terrible two or four (I can't remember). Nothing is ever their fault. It was smart of Vi to call Severus in. He can handle Harry and Lily Author's Response: Actually Harry's only seventeen months in this chapter, but still old enough to start throwing tantrums. And Vi is one smart cookie, she knows what's up. Sev's her ace in the hole.
Author's Response: Thanks and hope you like it when Sev sings!
What's that about? Only New Yorkers know decent food? I disagree with that. That line is the only problem I have with this chapter. It just seems like an awkward way of forcing backstory into the fic. Other than that, I loved this chapter. I'm glad Lily is starting to feel better, but it will probably take a little bit longer for her to finish grieving, if ever. I wonder if she'll have trouble falling in love with Sev because she might think she's betraying James? Thanks for the update. I can't wait to see Sev singing with Harry. Author's Response: No, and that wasn't intended as a criticism, just that Lily trusts Matthew's judgement, since he's more reliable than say Sirius or Remus, who aren't picky and would eat anything, and to her New Yorkers have more refined tastes. As for Lily, eventually she will heal, and once she allows herself to notice Severus as more than a friend, she will fall completely in love with him. Sev & Harry's sing-a-long is coming up, it should be a blast!
Author's Response: Thanks, so glad you like it!
Author's Response: Me too! I HATE that man! Maybe they'll have a bookburning party, LOL! I know a lot of people who come into B&N that are looking for a way to deal with their grief over losing a loved one and so many of them buy into the fiction that if they pay X amount of $ then they have this hotline to the afterworld or something. it's really sad how some con artists bilk people out of money and give them false hope. They are truly evil people. |
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