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Title: Of Tantrums and Conmen 12 Sep 2008 4:22 pm
Reviewer: preposterous purple crocodile (Signed) [Report This]
    I love all that healer stuff! It suits Sev so well! what kind of idiot made him a teacher?!

    lol for lockhart
    lily, how could you fall for that one?

    Author's Response:

     Don't know, but I think he's an ace Healer!

    Poor Lily, she was vulnerable.  But luckily she had Sev around to get her back on track.

Title: Of Tantrums and Conmen 01 Aug 2008 3:35 am
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    LOVED IT!! THANKS FOR WRITING IT WAS AWESOME! SEV IS A GREAT FRIEND AND HARRY'S ADORABLE!UPDATE SOON!!

    Author's Response: Thanks a lot! I've just posted chapter five!
Title: Of Tantrums and Conmen 31 Jul 2008 4:32 am
Reviewer: burns603 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great chapter! This story rocks! Can't wait to hear Sev sing, LOL! What will he sing anyway?

    Author's Response: Umm...you'll know when you see the next chapter title.
Title: Of Tantrums and Conmen 31 Jul 2008 3:14 am
Reviewer: blackmagicwoman (Anonymous) [Report This]
    really great job here! I'm in the medical profession too and can relate to Severus easily when he says patients accost him. I can't go to the supermarket without running into another patient who just happens to have a question that can't wait. You handled harry and Lily very well. Their relationship with Snape is developing nicely.

    Author's Response: Thanks, my sister is a doctor and she tells me funny stories all the time about herself and patients who think she has no life outside of the hospital.
Title: Of Tantrums and Conmen 31 Jul 2008 3:12 am
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Loved it! Your comments about dovtors and patients were right on. I get patients of mine who see me outside of my office exclaiming, "But Doctor, you shop here too!" as if I don't have a normal life. Once a patient was shocked to discover I went to the movies, as if it was odd to see a doctor having fun. people are strange! Anyway, loved the bit with harry and Sev and how he convinced Lily to distrust Lockhart, the fraud! I never liked him in the books either!

    Author's Response: So does my sister! And I really don't like Lockhart either!
Title: Of Tantrums and Conmen 30 Jul 2008 8:22 pm
Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed) [Report This]
    Nice, nice.

    Harry was being a terrible two or four (I can't remember). Nothing is ever their fault.

    It was smart of Vi to call Severus in. He can handle Harry and Lily

    Author's Response: Actually Harry's only seventeen months in this chapter, but still old enough to start throwing tantrums.  And Vi is one smart cookie, she knows what's up.  Sev's her ace in the hole.
Title: Of Tantrums and Conmen 30 Jul 2008 6:53 pm
Reviewer: Nightshade (Anonymous) [Report This]
    GREAT CHAPTER! :) Please update soon!

    Author's Response: Thanks and hope you like it when Sev sings!
Title: Of Tantrums and Conmen 30 Jul 2008 6:52 pm
Reviewer: ER (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Matthew knows decent food, he's from New York originally.

    What's that about? Only New Yorkers know decent food? I disagree with that. That line is the only problem I have with this chapter. It just seems like an awkward way of forcing backstory into the fic.

    Other than that, I loved this chapter. I'm glad Lily is starting to feel better, but it will probably take a little bit longer for her to finish grieving, if ever. I wonder if she'll have trouble falling in love with Sev because she might think she's betraying James? Thanks for the update. I can't wait to see Sev singing with Harry.

    Author's Response:

    No, and that wasn't intended as a criticism, just that Lily trusts Matthew's judgement, since he's more reliable than say Sirius or Remus, who aren't picky and would eat anything, and to her New Yorkers have more refined tastes. 

    As for Lily, eventually she will heal, and once she allows herself to notice Severus as more than a friend, she will fall completely in love with him.  Sev & Harry's sing-a-long is coming up, it should be a blast!

Title: Of Tantrums and Conmen 30 Jul 2008 5:51 pm
Reviewer: Romado (Signed) [Report This]
    Good part you are writing well

    Author's Response: Thanks, so glad you like it!
Title: Of Tantrums and Conmen 30 Jul 2008 5:18 pm
Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) [Report This]
    that chapter was great, sev handled lily extremely well with her obsession to talk to her late husband james, i hope lily burns all the lockhart books on a big bonfire

    Author's Response: Me too! I HATE that man! Maybe they'll have a bookburning party, LOL! I know a lot of people who come into B&N that are looking for a way to deal with their grief over losing a loved one and so many of them buy into the fiction that if they pay X amount of $ then they have this hotline to the afterworld or something.  it's really sad how some con artists bilk people out of money and give them false hope.  They are truly evil people.

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