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Reviews For Where Shadows Go
Author's Response: You're welcome! I always thought Sev could use some encouragement from the guys.
lol. kids are awesome. who needs tv? *runs off to start a sev cheer-squad* Awesome chapter! xox Author's Response: Yeah really, some of my nephews should have BEEN on TV with the stuff they pulled when they were little--it was better than Comedy Central. Most of the things I put down in my stories were things that they actaully did, you'll see a heck of a lot more of them coming up in further chapters here. *joins the sev cheer squad*
Author's Response: yeah, I'll get around to it. LOL! You'll see more of the Weasleys in future chapters
Could we see more inner turmoil? Some Death Eater conflict? Could we catch a glimpse of Severus' background? It would certainly give credibility to the plot you've cooked up. Author's Response: If you read the sequel Never Again, which was written first, you'll see plenty of angst, and learn about Severus past with his father Tobias, which is not pretty. Also, in this universe Sev was NEVER a Death Eater, there was no reason for him to be friends with Lucius since he had good friends in Remus, Sirius, Lily, and James as well. More of Severus background will be discussed with Lily, he doesn't like to talk about it much, but with Lily he will. And harry is not the BOY Who Lived either, since Voldemort was killed by James and Sirius permanently. In this fic you get to see a different side of Severus, the Healer not the spy.
n e way. great chapter! Author's Response: Yeah, aren't they hilarious! Troublemakers extraordinaire!
Sirius and Remus did well. That part with Sirius offering to tell Lily Sev would die if she didn’t go out with him was great! lol. You know you can trust Remus though, so that really helped Sev with the convincing. The whole cinnamon buns issue at the end was funny too, hehe. I can't wait to read the next chapter! I'm happy Sev is finally going to talk to Lily and I'm sure once the awkwardness ends things will go just fine :) Author's Response: Nope, he's a typical boy, LOL! They'll be back in this one too, soon as Sev & Lily tie the know and Harry is two. Sirius and Remus really want their 'brother' Severus to be happy and Remus knows what he's talking about! Sev and Lily will be fine once they get together, but first Severus must trust Lily.
Author's Response: Thanks and I'm working on it! :)
Author's Response: yes they'll be reappearing in later chapters. Thanks for your review!
Author's Response: Never thought he would! And you'll see how the talk goes soon! |
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