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Title: Never Second Best 27 Feb 2010 10:57 pm
Reviewer: CarlinPaddy (Signed) [Report This]
    Hey, Severus earned the bun anyway as Molly did make them for HIM
Title: Never Second Best 28 Oct 2008 8:10 pm
Reviewer: Muggle49 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Nice again! Thanks :)

    Author's Response: You're welcome! I always thought Sev could use some encouragement from the guys.
Title: Never Second Best 15 Sep 2008 2:33 pm
Reviewer: preposterous purple crocodile (Anonymous) [Report This]
    *snorts* bertie bots up the nose
    lol. kids are awesome. who needs tv?

    *runs off to start a sev cheer-squad*

    Awesome chapter!
    xox

    Author's Response:

    Yeah really, some of my nephews should have BEEN on TV with the stuff they pulled when they were little--it was better than Comedy Central.  Most of the things I put down in my stories were things that they actaully did, you'll see a heck of a lot more of them coming up in further chapters here. 

    *joins the sev cheer squad*

Title: Never Second Best 17 Aug 2008 9:17 pm
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    The recept for the bunns? Please? Heh, just kidding. I liked Molly and Ron, why would you ask? They were cute. Little-sun

    Author's Response: yeah, I'll get around to it. LOL! You'll see more of the Weasleys in future chapters
Title: Never Second Best 11 Aug 2008 8:19 am
Reviewer: IdealismNausea (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Though the opening scene was touching with little Ronnie, I feel as though I'm reading a story about a doctor named Bob, not Severus Snape. I understand that this is supposed to be an AU, but you've created a Leave it to Beaver sort of scenario toward the end that slowly grows in intensity. Yes, Severus is witty, but he's not a dork. And I seem to be getting that sort of vibe from his characterisation.

    Could we see more inner turmoil? Some Death Eater conflict? Could we catch a glimpse of Severus' background? It would certainly give credibility to the plot you've cooked up.

    Author's Response: If you read the sequel Never Again, which was written first, you'll see plenty of angst, and learn about Severus past with his father Tobias, which is not pretty.  Also, in this universe Sev was NEVER a Death Eater, there was no reason for him to be friends with Lucius since he had good friends in Remus, Sirius, Lily, and James as well.  More of Severus background will be discussed with Lily, he doesn't like to talk about it much, but with Lily he will.  And harry is not the BOY Who Lived either, since Voldemort was killed by James and Sirius permanently. In this fic you get to see a different side of Severus, the Healer not the spy. 
Title: Never Second Best 09 Aug 2008 8:01 pm
Reviewer: slytherensangel26 (Signed) [Report This]
    ron was priceless. lord i love the twins!

    n e way. great chapter!

    Author's Response: Yeah, aren't they hilarious! Troublemakers extraordinaire!
Title: Never Second Best 09 Aug 2008 6:57 am
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor innocent Ronnie, doesn't he know you should never listen to the twins? I had to laugh when he said he’d stuff beans up George’s nose next time! Does the kid ever learn? Lol. Glad the Weasleys made an appearance in your story :) they are some of my fav characters.

    Sirius and Remus did well. That part with Sirius offering to tell Lily Sev would die if she didn’t go out with him was great! lol. You know you can trust Remus though, so that really helped Sev with the convincing. The whole cinnamon buns issue at the end was funny too, hehe.

    I can't wait to read the next chapter! I'm happy Sev is finally going to talk to Lily and I'm sure once the awkwardness ends things will go just fine :)

    Author's Response:

    Nope, he's a typical boy, LOL! They'll be back in this one too, soon as Sev & Lily tie the know and Harry is two.  Sirius and Remus really want their 'brother' Severus to be happy and Remus knows what he's talking about!

    Sev and Lily will be fine once they get together, but first Severus must trust Lily.

Title: Never Second Best 07 Aug 2008 10:06 pm
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    OMG! THIS IS SUCH A SWEET STORY! I LOVE IT! WRITE MORE PLEEEAZZE!

    Author's Response: Thanks and I'm working on it! :)
Title: Never Second Best 07 Aug 2008 10:00 pm
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonderful chapter! Molly and Ron were adorable! Can they make a reappearance? And I love how Siri and Remus convinced Sev to go talk to Lily.

    Author's Response: yes they'll be reappearing in later chapters.  Thanks for your review!
Title: Never Second Best 07 Aug 2008 9:51 pm
Reviewer: burns603 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I loved it! I was laughing so hard, pleas eupdate soon, I need to know what happens. Go, Sev! take a chance, you won't regret it.

    Author's Response: Never thought he would! And you'll see how the talk goes soon!

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