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Title: Testing the Waters 15 Sep 2008 2:49 pm
Reviewer: preposterous purple crocodile (Signed) [Report This]
    "soft emerald green pantsuit with tiny golden bells about the collar"? ... I think I'm picturing it wrong because it sounds like an elf costume or something... I'm sure its much nicer than it sounds. ;) maybe this is an old '80s fashion trend that I am too young to remember....

    WOOT for SEV/LILY! Hooray! They kiss! OMG! *dances*

    well done!

    Author's Response:

    yeah, don't think of big jingle bells, they're tiny little golden ones that chime very very softly when you move and the sweater is a very soft cashmere with a heart shaped neckline.  Very pretty . .. my sister had a sweater and pants like that once and I loved it. 

    Yeah, don't you just love the romance!

Title: Testing the Waters 18 Aug 2008 7:24 pm
Reviewer: Serenity Snape (Signed) [Report This]
    Love it please update soon!!!!

    Author's Response: Great! I have some more love scenes planned for the next one, plus a surprise emergency and something more sinister at the end, but you'll see when I post it. 
Title: Testing the Waters 18 Aug 2008 7:18 am
Reviewer: slytherensangel26 (Signed) [Report This]
    very sweet! i can't wait for more!

    Author's Response: I love the romance part of this! And there's more to come.
Title: Testing the Waters 17 Aug 2008 7:53 am
Reviewer: Talon3 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wow! Not meaning to disrespect James, but if he treated Lily like that, then she definately needs someone, Sev, who would treat her like she is his empress of his world. And are you going to go formuch more romance, not in a uh bad way, I mean like PGish, orwhat. Not going over, I don't think. It seems to me that is how your writing style is. PG. LOVE IT!!!

    Author's Response: Yes, James was never really around for her, since he was busy with his career and obsessed with hunting Voldemort. He loved her, but on his own terms.  Severus, however, loves her for herself alone, and he will continue to show that.  There will be a few more romantic chapters in here and I keep the explicit part to a minimum, since this is a website that's rated for teens and families.  Plus, HP was never really meant for fully explicit romance and that kind of thing.  Thanks for your review and so glad you're loving this!
Title: Testing the Waters 17 Aug 2008 4:28 am
Reviewer: Keats (Signed) [Report This]
    Finally Sev told Lily how he feels it was a very good evening. love the stories of their youth and the pranks on Petunia LOL

    Author's Response: Yeah, they had some fun as children, didn't they? And it was good that Severus finally found his nerve and said what he feels for once.  More romance to follow.  Thanks for reviewing and I've also updated Angel too.
Title: Testing the Waters 17 Aug 2008 1:28 am
Reviewer: Mel (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Such a lovely romantic chapter! Wish i was Lily and Sev was kissing ME like that!

    And the part with Petunia was really funny too!

    Author's Response: Me too! I'd probably faint, LOL!
Title: Testing the Waters 17 Aug 2008 1:23 am
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    yes! You kiss her, Sev! Loved it! Can't wait for more!

    Author's Response: Thanks and I'm glad you liked it!
Title: Testing the Waters 17 Aug 2008 1:18 am
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    Awesome! I felt like I was there! And I loved the shared tales of their childhood and Vi's advice was just what Severus needed to hear.

    Author's Response: Yes it was and I think he took it to heart, don't you?
Title: Testing the Waters 17 Aug 2008 1:07 am
Reviewer: burns603 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great chapter! love the romance! And the pranks too. Lily and Sev sure had some time with Petunia. Update soon!

    Author's Response: Thanks and I'll be updating as fast as I can.  I love a good romance.
Title: Testing the Waters 16 Aug 2008 10:51 pm
Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed) [Report This]
    It was a lovely date and a great kiss.

    Also, if Lily had picked on Petunia using magic the way she was laughing about, I could understand why would have such a fear of a magic child being around her non magic child. Think about it - the snippiness of Petunia was normal 14 - 16 year old angst.

    The "pranks" were magical in nature - something she couldn't defend against. And I didn't hear anything about parents stepping in and telling Lily that under no circumstances was Lily to use magic on Petunia.

    How you like to be a 15 year old and look in the mirror and see a pig face (and know your sister gave it to you)? Lots of fun for the pranker - not so much fun for the prankie.

    But I still loved it.

    Author's Response: You're right, but when Sev & lily were small, petunia picked on them unmercifully, locking them in closets and being nasty to Sev, and back then they couldn't control what their magic did.  When they were eleven, then yes they could, but by then Lily was trying to get some of her own back and I wanted to show that she wasn't the perfect princess some people make her out to be.  And there actually was a time when Vi and Hal forbade Lily to do magic around Petunia, they just haven't mentioned it yet.  But yes, that could be some of the reason why Petunis doesn't like magic, although the other part of it is that she's jealous and wants it herself. 

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