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Title: You Are My Life 23 Sep 2008 11:01 pm
Reviewer: GoldenPhoenix (Signed) [Report This]
    I love this story. I know Lily is going to die but I want to read more. I've noticed that you haven't updated this story in a while. Please update soon.

    Author's Response: yes, that's true, she will eventually.  I haven't updated this one because I've been working on my other story Arms of a Dark Angel.  But I will have a chapter posted for this soon, I haven't forgotten it.
Title: You Are My Life 15 Sep 2008 3:02 pm
Reviewer: preposterous purple crocodile (Signed) [Report This]
    Sevvy, stop being so overprotective! *growls*
    Lily can take care of herself!

    lol good chapter! Great battle scene!
    Harry is brilliant :) fangs and all.

    Author's Response:

    he can't help it, LoL!

    Glad you liked that battle scene.

    Harry's something, the little vampire!

Title: You Are My Life 01 Sep 2008 4:51 am
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    Great bunch of chapters!

    I think the date went really well and there were some really sweet moments. I'm glad Sev and Lily finally are getting together, but it seems they can never get a break, what with pesky Death Eaters popping up and ruining everyone's good time.

    I think the spells were cool and really helpful. Lily was awesome coming in to help and I thought it was both funny and sweet when she and Sev fought then kissed in front of everyone. Sev sure didn't appreciate the interruption, lol :P. Just when they think they can go home and relax though, Harry brings on more stress for them, what with biting poor Neville and acting like a little brat. You have to love him anyway though :)

    Hope to read more soon!

    Author's Response: They'll be getting a good break now, since the DE are sent running with their tails between their legs.  And Severus can get pretty steamed when his kissing with Lily is interrupted, LOL! Poor guy, he doesn't get much time alone with her, not with the schedule he has.  As for Harry, you'll be seeing a lot more of him and Sev in the next chapter as well as Grandpa Evans.  He can be a terrible brat, but also sweet as well, like any little kid.
Title: You Are My Life 30 Aug 2008 11:12 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    Tabasco sauce? That's really interesting to compare the methods used (though I'm still childless). Here people don't give tabasco sauce or any hot/spicy things to children (nor soap), it destroys taste-buds on tongue and spice is considered unhealthy.
    Sorry for picking on details. I liked Severus fighting all right. L-S

    Author's Response: Yes,we don't normally give that stuff to kids either unless it's a punishment.  Usually after the first or occasionally the second time the kids learn to stop biting, swearing, or whatever.  I know some people who give their kids hot peppers and stuff, but I would never do that, since I'm allergic to them.
Title: You Are My Life 30 Aug 2008 7:17 am
Reviewer: slytherensangel26 (Signed) [Report This]
    *shudders* ewww Tabasco sauce...my parents did the same thing but it was for swearing and lying. I still hate it to this day!

    Lily is awesome!

    This chapter rocks! I can't wait to read more!

    Author's Response: Thanks, and my niece does that when her kid bites, that's where I got it from.  I should be posting more soon!
Title: You Are My Life 29 Aug 2008 7:30 am
Reviewer: blackmagicwoman (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Yay! The good guys won! I thought they would, but you never know. And Harry's a little devil with his biting and screeching. LOL!

    Author's Response: yes they did!
Title: You Are My Life 29 Aug 2008 6:04 am
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    I loved them, they were very creative. Lily was awesome. And Harry, he is such a little rascal...my sons did very similar things as a toddler.

    Author's Response: great, the spells were fun for me to create.  lily was once in training to be an auror and harry is such a little boy.
Title: You Are My Life 29 Aug 2008 6:01 am
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    Good for Sev and Lily! I was glad to see Lily have a more active role in defending those she loves. I also liked the part with Sirius and Remus yelling at Sev to quit kissing Lily. And Harry was just too funny and bratty. My son used to do the same thing when he was that age.

    Author's Response: harry's a typical toddler.  I love him though. I like Sev and Lily together they make a great team.
Title: You Are My Life 29 Aug 2008 5:56 am
Reviewer: burns603 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I loved this chapter! The whole thing was wonderful. I liked how you let Lily fight too and boy that Harry is a handful!

    Author's Response: he sure is and I don't like mousy Lily.  She's a fighter.
Title: You Are My Life 29 Aug 2008 1:26 am
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    I loved Lily telling Sev firmly to put her down, lol Harry is so cute when he is being punished, typical toddler screaming lol

    Author's Response: Yes, Lily can take care of herself and she wanted Sev to know that.  Harry really is such a typical toddler, I modeled him off of my nephews.

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