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Reviews For Where Shadows Go
Author's Response: yes, that's true, she will eventually. I haven't updated this one because I've been working on my other story Arms of a Dark Angel. But I will have a chapter posted for this soon, I haven't forgotten it.
Lily can take care of herself! lol good chapter! Great battle scene! Harry is brilliant :) fangs and all. Author's Response: he can't help it, LoL! Glad you liked that battle scene. Harry's something, the little vampire!
I think the date went really well and there were some really sweet moments. I'm glad Sev and Lily finally are getting together, but it seems they can never get a break, what with pesky Death Eaters popping up and ruining everyone's good time. I think the spells were cool and really helpful. Lily was awesome coming in to help and I thought it was both funny and sweet when she and Sev fought then kissed in front of everyone. Sev sure didn't appreciate the interruption, lol :P. Just when they think they can go home and relax though, Harry brings on more stress for them, what with biting poor Neville and acting like a little brat. You have to love him anyway though :) Hope to read more soon! Author's Response: They'll be getting a good break now, since the DE are sent running with their tails between their legs. And Severus can get pretty steamed when his kissing with Lily is interrupted, LOL! Poor guy, he doesn't get much time alone with her, not with the schedule he has. As for Harry, you'll be seeing a lot more of him and Sev in the next chapter as well as Grandpa Evans. He can be a terrible brat, but also sweet as well, like any little kid.
Sorry for picking on details. I liked Severus fighting all right. L-S Author's Response: Yes,we don't normally give that stuff to kids either unless it's a punishment. Usually after the first or occasionally the second time the kids learn to stop biting, swearing, or whatever. I know some people who give their kids hot peppers and stuff, but I would never do that, since I'm allergic to them.
Lily is awesome! This chapter rocks! I can't wait to read more! Author's Response: Thanks, and my niece does that when her kid bites, that's where I got it from. I should be posting more soon!
Author's Response: yes they did!
Author's Response: great, the spells were fun for me to create. lily was once in training to be an auror and harry is such a little boy.
Author's Response: harry's a typical toddler. I love him though. I like Sev and Lily together they make a great team.
Author's Response: he sure is and I don't like mousy Lily. She's a fighter.
Author's Response: Yes, Lily can take care of herself and she wanted Sev to know that. Harry really is such a typical toddler, I modeled him off of my nephews. |
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